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Respect Me

Postby D'Leh » Dec 11th, '09, 17:32

1.i been doin shit to long, been had money
2.just ate some rappers yeah an ya boy still hungry
3.where they at stil runnin all around the country
4.i dont let it bug me pull ya girl face to my waist from a distance looks like we e hugging.
5.but naw no rudness or disprespect
6ima just broadcast yo sorry ass an your childish intellect
7.you can be the subject of neglect
8.it dont matter you still lame in every apect.
9.i could sit here an wonder why you ryhme.
10.an you continualy post it waistin everyones time
11.even when its rain nigga i steady grind.
12.how can i just be gettin to you when im already in your mind
13.an i could look in back of ya head an still wont find
14.a more worth while flow like mine i swear some niggas blind
15.an even though they push me tell me i should quit.
16.do some detective work an some shit dont fit.
every time i spit you feel the need to commit suicide.
cause you cant handle my lyrical genocide
i know you be commitin ya hate crimes,, rap racisim.
continue feedin the media make a nigga want a career in journalism.
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Respect Me

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 11th, '09, 17:55

Idk about it. Kinda off flow from me. Seen way better from you. Wat's with the numbers lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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