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Nimbus Ft. Anonymous; Tears Don't Fall

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Nimbus Ft. Anonymous; Tears Don't Fall

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 12th, '09, 03:50

(Chorus x2)
Love me, hate me, hurt me deeply
Our hopes and dreams, in the dirt beneath me
Her conscience calls, they ring so loudly
Tears don’t fall, now they crash around me

(NIMBUS)
Shadow of my former self, morbid in this dormant hell
These tears crash, FUCK YOU is what the torrents yell
Miss me, I can sorta tell, and now that you’re gone
I see our relations were stable as J Fox’s forearms
Wrote you like 4 songs, but trust me, it didn’t help
And if tears were acid, I wouldn’t have your picture left
Miss it, yeah, but bitch, you’re not a hot star
Left my heart empty and vacant…kinda like your bras are
You and him, talkin more, behind me while the distance grew
Had me hating my self, like what the fuck I didn’t do
Don’t get it misconstrued, yeah, my hatred has grew
But I took the barrel out my mouth and just aimed it at you
Painted a fool, struck out, this guys the batter up
On deck, open heart, waiting to get it shattered bud
Add it up, you leave soon as it gets tough
Learned my lesson hun, don’t date sluts for the big buts
Shit sucks, why would I ask you to be my queen
Love drunk, cupid don’t need to see I.D.
Said it was a short break, it’d be light speed
Held my breath and died blue, just like Levi Jeans

(Chorus x2)
Love me, hate me, hurt me deeply
Our hopes and dreams, in the dirt beneath me
Her conscience calls, they ring so loudly
Tears don’t fall, now they crash around me

(Anonymous)
Life drains through knife pains, stays the same way
but flames drain every day, brain decays, sane-
insane? OK? I don't know when it's coming through
nothings new, something's funny? maybe it's my trust in you
blood lust, encased love, and loss, lost cause
my jaws all, sore, tired of all yall
sitting, writing on walls, fighting the calls
of the demons in my mind, leaking blood on my palms
speaking to the blind, cause my face is gone
they can't see what is found, what is lost, or pawned
In their eyes, I'm the same, just a shadow of black
and when I speak I can leave with my battle intact
never believed, never seen, never cried for you
everytime you ever lied, I was dieing fool,
but now, I'm a different person, a version of hate
celibate to your pain, I'm a virgin of fate
you'll never fuck me again, with the blood in my pen
I'll make sure that you'll die, and I'm living within
never giving me sin, with red ribbons
and ten presents, lead in my head writing dread in ten seconds
instead you will die, I will live forever
motherfucker you are gone, dead in embers
and my head remembers, I'll never forget it
if you're family or not, on my shit list, it's sentenced...

(Chorus x2)
Love me, hate me, hurt me deeply
Our hopes and dreams, in the dirt beneath me
Her conscience calls, they ring so loudly
Tears don’t fall, now they crash around me
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Nimbus Ft. Anonymous; Tears Don't Fall

Postby Spyder » Dec 12th, '09, 04:08

call me retarded, but i flowed this like Hell Breaks Loose and it worked
not as happy of course but you know

dope collab guys both verses came hot
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Re: Nimbus Ft. Anonymous; Tears Don't Fall

Postby Emadyville » Dec 12th, '09, 04:32

Both verses were dope as fuck :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Nimbus Ft. Anonymous; Tears Don't Fall

Postby Solace » Dec 15th, '09, 02:44

This collab needs more views..So dope guys. Both of you wrote real dope stuff :worship:
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Re: Nimbus Ft. Anonymous; Tears Don't Fall

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 15th, '09, 04:53

Spyder wrote:call me retarded, but i flowed this like Hell Breaks Loose and it worked
not as happy of course but you know

dope collab guys both verses came hot


lol I haven't even listened to that yet :p thanks though man :y: props

Emadyville wrote:Both verses were dope as fuck :y:


thanks, I really appreciate it man :y:

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Solace wrote:This collab needs more views..So dope guys. Both of you wrote real dope stuff :worship:


means alot :worship:
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Re: Nimbus Ft. Anonymous; Tears Don't Fall

Postby Emadyville » Dec 15th, '09, 04:59

Is this gunna get recorded?
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Nimbus Ft. Anonymous; Tears Don't Fall

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 15th, '09, 05:05

Emadyville wrote:Is this gunna get recorded?


I wish, sadly I just started writing and investing in a mic and learning to do audio isn't in my near future :y:

I wish though, Anon could record it though, his verse and the chorus (which I got from Tears Don't Fall by Bullet For My Valentine partially)
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Re: Nimbus Ft. Anonymous; Tears Don't Fall

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 16th, '09, 00:38

Bump :o
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Re: Nimbus Ft. Anonymous; Tears Don't Fall

Postby dR3 » Dec 19th, '09, 01:28

This screams RECORD ME
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Re: Nimbus Ft. Anonymous; Tears Don't Fall

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 19th, '09, 02:36

dR.dR3 wrote:This screams RECORD ME
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