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Possum Mouth

Postby J Roc » Dec 12th, '09, 20:02

Ur Piff's The Best? Whaa ... You could prally get high off A Cigarette Butt
Pussy... I Don't dig Ur Text Stuff. I'll Gag Him Until His "Lip's Stick" Like How His Sister's Dressed Up
Chick I'm Betta ..... Tech's-clap Give him a "Wet-Back" If i check the Border I Bet Ur There
Honestly-Guy's If Ur Lyrics "Top-Of-The-Line" It's The Northern Hemisphere
You Got The Poorest Text Career, Ur Running On Empty Without Checking Ya Fuel
Think u Have-a-Chance i'll send shots "Back-To-Back" Like Right Before Steps inna Duel
Check Me On Google.. I Passed-The-Charts Cuz Rap-Is-Art but Without Sketchin a Doodle
The Rap Game So-Fake-Now I Thought there was "No-Way-Out" But i Tend to A Loop Hole
Left the game Now im Sending u Dudes Home , "Adios" like Whut im Lacking
U the Dump Type, Faggot... That would bring a Spoon to Gun Fight Matches
Unlike That Kid... (Who?) ... Jesus-its-roccy i'll put "Heat on ya body" like Sunlight Dammit
This Veteran's Back Bitch ... My Pencil's a Savage Always Ahead Of The Pack Shit
Never An Addict Always Pop Excedrin Tablet's Get-high Think-Why I Was Never The Champ ... Shit
Prally Cuz My Sentances Clashes Dont Need a red Name My Level Is Passed It
Hell Dawg I Fell Off I'm Still Better Than That Kid .. (Who?) .. Naw I Won't Mention The Faggot
Pretending u have it Bitch-Please i'll Stomp You With "6-Feet" Then put These Men in a casket
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Re: Possum Mouth

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 12th, '09, 20:05

As usual, your multi-syllabic rhyming is fantastic. :y:

But I think your punchlines/wordplay are a little lacking nowadays.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Possum Mouth

Postby Solace » Dec 13th, '09, 05:33

Haha dope shit :y:
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