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Re: You're Haunted.

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 13th, '09, 01:05

Not bad, I liked it...but I don't like the imcomplete sentence style from you...but whatever do what you want man...good drop tho
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Re: You're Haunted.

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 13th, '09, 01:48

Scott M wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Not bad, I liked it...but I don't like the imcomplete sentence style from you...but whatever do what you want man...good drop tho

it's not incomplete, it carries on the next line. eminem does it :shifty:

Yea I know but I'm saying I don't like it from you and just between you and me I don't like it from Em either. I like crisp clean rhymes where you don't have to slur to rhyme like Em does
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