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Fired Up

Postby Requiem » Dec 13th, '09, 09:54

Just keep talkin, just keep walkin
You building up a coffin you gonna get locked in,
Your gonna need morphine when I go to mach10
I’m a monster, and homie I just marched in.
You better find a place to hide and crawl in,
I’m pissed off, miss you I still won’t stop then,
I’m takin a lighter to this place, and I’ll try to,
Smoke you out like fucking terrorists in Al Qaeda,
Sirens aint gonna save you I’ll fight the firefighter,
The fire’s getting higher from bodies I pile up.
Watch your mouth I’m fired up, try and u’ll find your fucked,
Go ahead and try your luck, I’m waitin by the firetruck.

Chorus

Don’t diss me cuz I’m fired up. (I said)
(repeat line)
Watch your mouth or it’ll be wired shut (I said)
Don’t diss me cuz I’m fired up.

Verse 2

I’m still manic depressive, I’m still compulsive obsessive,
Try and test me you’ll see I’m also aggressive,
Homie I hope u listened, and aint missin the message
Or you’ll find yourself hanging from your own damn necklace,
I aint to be messed with, I’m fuckin psychopathic,
The story of my life is a never ending dramatic.
And yours will be the end of a tragic,
If you ever doubt me again, call me Em reenacted.
I’ve separated myself, shit I said it myself,
I’m never biting him again, kid kanniff’s on the shelf.
Call me an Em clone, but don’t expect it to be felt,
Last time I checked, check my name, how’s it spelt?

Chorus

Verse 3

This goes as a warning to all you mother fuckers,
And all you fuckin meatheads, and firetruckers,
Down to the underground, and hatin suckers,
I’m saying this once, so put it on your bumpers,
I’m tired of the comparisons (comparisons)
If I wanted to be Em I’d fuckin wear his skin.
So shut the fuck up, homie I’m American,
I’m not black, I’m white, I’m just a fairer skin.
I know how I grew up, don’t act like I don’t,
Fuckin stereotype, does a rapper make? Nope
But I don’t care if I’m white, I know what I’m about,
So watch your mouth, or prepare for the final bout.


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Re: Fired Up

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 13th, '09, 09:58

THE FLOW IS INSANE!!!!!!!
Dope lyrics as well, kinda simple but i'm bettin the beat makes it a lot better.
Sick shit brotha, keep this comin! :y:
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50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Fired Up

Postby Requiem » Dec 13th, '09, 09:59

Arabian Shady wrote:THE FLOW IS INSANE!!!!!!!
Dope lyrics as well, kinda simple but i'm bettin the beat makes it a lot better.
Sick shit brotha, keep this comin! :y:

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Re: Fired Up

Postby eric tolle » Dec 13th, '09, 11:48

GOOD STUFF BUDDY !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Fired Up

Postby eric tolle » Dec 13th, '09, 11:59

Alright then buddy!!!!!!!!!!1
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Re: Fired Up

Postby classthe_king » Dec 13th, '09, 16:21

haha who was this to :shifty:
Anyways like Chett said good shit just didn't like the chorus, i guess i would have to hear it. Flow was great on all three verses. I think i like the first verse the best.
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Re: Fired Up

Postby Requiem » Dec 13th, '09, 19:11

thx for the feed everyone... and yea, the chorus is a completely different flow... but when i get around to productions it'll all make sense. hopefully :confusion:
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Re: Fired Up

Postby Vettori » Dec 13th, '09, 21:58

overall it was really dope...Liked the flow on this part, it was "perfect wording"

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Try and test me you’ll see I’m also aggressive,
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Re: Fired Up

Postby BILI » Dec 13th, '09, 22:00

Wow man its dope,all 3 verses were dope,1st is the best :y: ,nice rhymes and flow is awesome 2,so nice job,oh and chorus is ok for me,I can rap it in a way that it sounds dope :y:


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