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Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 13th, '09, 16:06

If my body was the ink, couldn't put me in the pen
Call me korean, putting pussies at they end
you can follow my speaking, leaving bitches in a tent
as my sorrow is leaking, breathing stitches in and send
all the wallowing demons, can be leaving me to spend
hollowness years in interfering with my sense
callow believing all the heathens and it's tense
cause I'm borrowing living, sleeping giant that is spent
appalled cause I'm giving, other people different things
I'm like Saul, with a spirit, smothered evil under wings
suffering nothing but wondering inside of another thing
nothing is cumbering, son in me asking for father, please
slaughtering I'm seeing, is authoring my weeping
it's seemingly potent to being deceiving like treason
believe in even though I know, it's old with no reason
but I need it, the secret of life broken to pieces
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Verse

Postby classthe_king » Dec 13th, '09, 16:29

This was insane :worship: Your rhyming has got amazing. Keep it up :smoking:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Verse

Postby BILI » Dec 13th, '09, 16:42

Dope man :worship:
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Re: Verse

Postby Spyder » Dec 14th, '09, 02:58

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Re: Verse

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 14th, '09, 03:29

Spyder wrote::confusion:

:unsure: :unsure:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Verse

Postby Spyder » Dec 14th, '09, 22:36

MC Anonymous wrote:
Spyder wrote::confusion:

:unsure: :unsure:
:o :o

call me crazy but this verse wasnt good :(
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