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40 Bars

Postby mcZu » Dec 13th, '09, 22:24

Am I good enough? Or is good not enough?
I've had it, it's enough, I'm good with or without the love
You don’t know what’s good enough ‘till you know what’s mo’ than good enough
So, knowing me I won’t stop for enough
I’ll yell ‘till I meet the strange figures from the Knowing, cuz
I’ll sell my soul when the Sahara sees snowmen
I’m stacking them faces like a totem
Make enemies moveless like post mortem
Y’all create boredom, all I do is impress
Aura like a congress, mood stuck in depress
Environment like a con, yes, would luck be the best?
Feels like I'm crashing, Tiger Woods, fuck a debt
I'm higher up, though stuck up aint how I act
My soul intact, horrible days? Plenty more, indeed
I try to win, though, like Twenty-four, but it seems
That I'm different than what normal means
Or am I normal and is this just a different dream?
It seems that I'm on a different scheme
Writing and looking back how I ran and sung
I'm in the future, y'all are still stuck in the renaissance
Am I man enough, son? These days are slim
Seek ways to begin my days with anti-weak hymns
I won't break more than once, I aint Cissé's shins
My lyrical range is long like Jay leno’s chin
I’ll dismantle your eyes form your eye sockets and put them in your abdomen
Just to show you how hungry I am, no gomen
I’m not apologizing in Japanese, maharishi, please
Just meditate like a rendezvous in the past
This is Rashun, who? A.K.A I-Min in the past
Usually go by Zu, y’all are just fake ass con’s contacting wrong
Songs while connecting albums which y’all confuse for demo’s
I’m the man, yo, so, I’ll show how
In the hood they ask for ‘Key mo’..’ like cancer patients
Y’all the answer and I’m the solution for the lament patience
Hip Hop had on it’s terms
I’ll fuck you up and make you bitch taste my sperm
Your bitch is giving you a headache ‘cause she’s giving you my grain
I’mma do it my way, all day, every day
Y’all are just seven days, I’m a century leaping from may to may
I’m a decade of skills, you? You may decay...
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: 40 Bars

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 13th, '09, 22:26

Got a sneak peak at this mafucker...still think its dope...good work Zu I like it alot
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Re: 40 Bars

Postby mcZu » Dec 14th, '09, 20:36

Thanks Fa-Q, appreciate it. :b:
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Re: 40 Bars

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 15th, '09, 05:01

kinda like what I said on the other one, you're slick but I dislike the style, no sweat though, this was ill, the "enough" repetition sounded a bit like Budden though and I did not like it, ruined the beginning

still nice, keep it up man :y:
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Re: 40 Bars

Postby mcZu » Dec 15th, '09, 11:56

Nimbus_9 wrote:kinda like what I said on the other one, you're slick but I dislike the style, no sweat though, this was ill, the "enough" repetition sounded a bit like Budden though and I did not like it, ruined the beginning

still nice, keep it up man :y:

Thanks Nimbus, 'preciate it, bro. Lol, yeah, the enough part is kinda abit like Budden. :b:
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Re: 40 Bars

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 15th, '09, 17:23

you killed it man ,, love it all
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Re: 40 Bars

Postby mcZu » Dec 17th, '09, 23:06

Slim Zaddy wrote:you killed it man ,, love it all

Thanks Zaddy, 'preciate it man. You should drop mo' often. :b:
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