rapping as a drug addict

[Edge]

lemme get some feedback, i tried getting creative

i realize if i get rich, il become a drug adict
already got bad habits, so y not get at it?
pills in my palm, y not have it?
its some bad shit
2 acid tabs and a bad trip
wonder if il ever get passed it
light up a blunt and never pass it
approach my drug dealer, strapped, and flash it
ask where the stash is than i stash it
keep takin drugs avoids the crashes
run outta pills, run to the stash, where the hash is
hasish, the canabis is,
which leads to the needle, wonder what this rash is
the guy i got the neddle from, probably passed it
so now i got STDs from passin needles
amount of heroin curculatings lethal
PCP makes me feel cerebal
and the shrooms got me seein beatles
maybe i should slow down for a while
but im wild from the relapse, but a pill makes me smile
light a blunt, theres no denial that im hooked to the drugs
take a couple downers and pass out on the rug
look at this hole iv dug
im so zombified i shrug it off like no big deal
coke takes away from my hunger, dont 'member my least meal
grab the steel and steal some more narcotics
i gotta crave, i cant stop it

[noel]

I Love it!!

Very creative and very honest.

Your next verse should be about rehab etc... LOL

anyway- good luck!!

[Edge]

I Love it!!

Very creative and very honest.

Your next verse should be about rehab etc... LOL

anyway- good luck!!

thanks, i was actually thinking of doing the next verse about rehab lol

[Vettori]

Some nice lines, not a fan of the over usage of drugs LOL... But made it work, soo good work man

[Edge]

Some nice lines, not a fan of the over usage of drugs LOL... But made it work, soo good work man

thanks... im no druggie either lol just stick with the all natural weed haha

[Boston]

its pretty good.. i found some parts of the flow choppy and kind of reminded me of some underground shit dont ask me why. iuno. but does its job lol. peep my new verse... 'personal shit'