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Sacrifical Marriage.

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Sacrifical Marriage.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 15th, '09, 02:51

I be writing with my rhymes, when all it does it's hitting me
what am I to do with all this fucking misery
sitting ducking miserably, from people that are hidden, please
I am to young, to dumb, life a mystery
planting these rotten seeds, inside of my memory
all my enemies, growing inside me with energy
with my shaken knees, bleeding under covers of leaves
don't want to be the person that's smothered in grease
and it's funny cause, girl, you're a mother to me
cause you treat me with respect, plus you're loving with deeds
I don't want you to the think, that I am leaving to be
In the skies with my God, cause the bleeding you see
This is different, slithering inside of my mind
is a crime, that is whispering to spine so I die
So instead of taking of life, I'm taking my own
I know, that you understand, I'll awaken alone

Drain me dry, take my life, until I'm part of you
I have nothing left, to give to you my love....
I wanna know..

Baby, this is a letter, this is heaven on earth
I never thought about my life, when I stepped on the dirt
and thought about it first, how it's a metaphor to me
Cause I never thought about my own letters forcefully
Cause the dirt is my body, and the shoes step all over
I'm so sick and tired of abuse and the horror
a noose in the corner, It is loose with a aura
I write this cause I can't go and use the aurora
as a guide to the north, and the brightness of stars
I'm stuck in my ground, while fighting the gods
I'm writing this to you, so you know when I'm gone
that I loved you so, I am going to god
last few breaths, as I'm hanging from noose
I will write last wish, and it's banging with truth
My wish, when you die, you can come to me
and we can stay with each other for eternity

Drain me dry, take my life, until I'm part of you
I have nothing left, to give to you my love....
I wanna know..
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Sacrifical Marriage.

Postby Solace » Dec 15th, '09, 02:56

Pretty sick..Nice message...Dope flows and multies were nice. Imagery was nice, enjoyed the dirt-life metaphor. :y:
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Re: Sacrifical Marriage.

Postby macdaddy019967 » Dec 15th, '09, 03:29

wow insane flow this shit is awesome :worship:
its my second favorite piece from u but my favorite shit from you is still that lyrical slaughter piece you wrote awhile back :smoking:
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Re: Sacrifical Marriage.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 15th, '09, 03:32

Thank you both.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Sacrifical Marriage.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 15th, '09, 21:05

Bump
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Sacrifical Marriage.

Postby dR3 » Dec 19th, '09, 01:26

Excellent! :y:
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