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For The Road

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For The Road

Postby D'Leh » Dec 15th, '09, 19:35

come back, yea,
hahaha, one fer the road...., and it goes...

jump back, help the slum jack fight off the dumb hack,
ima the whole loaf, and yall just little crumbs stacked,
im king of the pride, and everyone else just be some cats,
i swing lyrical swords, yall just throw thumb tacks,
layin fun tracks, yall scream a diss, and i just humm back,
fuck that, i never left, just to good fer a come back.
too great for a sung track, yea i just flow like swum laps,
walk, i dont run laps, always spittin big, I DONE CAPS.
the world? yea kids i already fucking spun that, done that,
been there, and still never came back, im dark like the sun sat,
challenged god to a boxing match, never came but still won that.
im jus spittin shit insane, jus keep hittin scripts in pain,
lyicaly kickin to the brain, stickin to ma name, my game,
im like a jock with a broken arm, kids im not fuckin playin,
candle with dragon wax, yea no flicker in my fuckin flame,
spittin like a batter in a game.
im swingin fer the fences just hittin scripts relentless,
you dont wanna die? fry? then dont fuckin tempt this,
wack MCS lives get SPENT quick, yea, i kill SENCEsless,
lets battle, ill bring a line and you spit a fuckin st list.

so any feed?
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: For The Road

Postby Cookzee » Dec 15th, '09, 19:40

that shit is dope as man, i love that flow, went down very nice buddy, keep it up :y:
survival is taught by the survivors, not by those who benefitted.
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Re: For The Road

Postby AOBrien09 » Dec 15th, '09, 21:19

Nice flow, an you got good multies, good how you stuck with the same rhyme for 11 lines aswell, overall nice drop man :y:
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