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Resurrection Mary

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 16th, '09, 01:50

Resurrection Mary, redemption of people
brought up to evil............ I'm so deceitful
Resurrection Mary, has seen me on steeples
crying to God, with an evil cerebral
Resurrection Mary, A vengeance of spirits
hear it, I am not the one to go perish
Resurrection Mary, hear me, I'm sorry
I deserve to live, yet I die in their honor...

She waved, I was driving on the highway
looking at me, her eyes stayed on my mind's face
It scared me, so I let her get in the back
she walked in, it was foggy, I went without slack
the tires driving on the road, and she talked a little
voice echoed, it was strange, I was shocked, belittled
So I looked at her funny, and I saw the light
between her eyes, it was gone, I'm appalled at sight
I said, are you Ok?, she looked at me
then the horns of a truck, got me shook-en, see?
So I swerved out the lane, scared as hell with her
car damaged with a smash, as it laughed with burns
and when I looked, to see, if she was Ok
she was gone, nobody there, I'm bleeding and pray
So I walk down the highway, waving arms
just then, a car stopped to save my warmth

Resurrection Mary, redemption of people
brought up to evil............ I'm so deceitful
Resurrection Mary, has seen me on steeples
crying to God, with an evil cerebral
Resurrection Mary, A vengeance of spirits
hear it, I am not the one to go perish
Resurrection Mary, hear me, I'm sorry
I deserve to live, yet I die in their honor...

He said, get in, I could take you where you want to go
I don't know, maybe you'll show, the city the gold
He started to laugh, and offered me the front seat
I walked through the door, sat down, it was bumpy
when I turned to look at him, his jaw was down, what now?
I don't know what I did, with a frown he said how?
I'm like wow, I just opened and sat down, what's wrong
now he's sweating, and he's pale, he waled to get lost
I said nah, you gotta take me where I need to go
bleeding flows, through my chest plate, and you know
it hurts.. and he drives quicker and quicker, I wither
see a tunnel in my vision, it's lifting, as he shivers
a golden aura in my visage, it's blinding what he's seeing
I see Europeans, Indians Caucasians interweaving
I'm believing and then I hear a car crash, I'm all sad
now he's waving at other cars, to get himself back...

Resurrection Mary, redemption of people
brought up to evil............ I'm so deceitful
Resurrection Mary, has seen me on steeples
crying to God, with an evil cerebral
Resurrection Mary, A vengeance of spirits
hear it, I am not the one to go perish
Resurrection Mary, hear me, I'm sorry
I deserve to live, yet I die in their honor...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Resurrection Mary

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 16th, '09, 02:08

Kinda reminds me of Big World by Killah Priest which is a good thing

great song, great story, this needs recorded :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Resurrection Mary

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 16th, '09, 02:12

Nimbus_9 wrote:Kinda reminds me of Big World by Killah Priest which is a good thing

great song, great story, this needs recorded :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:

:worship: :worship:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Resurrection Mary

Postby DƎRDYPK » Dec 16th, '09, 05:11

I already told you what I think about this on MSN :y:
keep at it :smoking:
really looking forward to more pieces with story telling
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Re: Resurrection Mary

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 16th, '09, 05:33

DerdyPK wrote:I already told you what I think about this on MSN :y:
keep at it :smoking:
really looking forward to more pieces with story telling

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Re: Resurrection Mary

Postby Arrinef » Dec 16th, '09, 05:34

:y: :worship: :b:
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Re: Resurrection Mary

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 20th, '09, 02:01

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LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Resurrection Mary

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 20th, '09, 02:10

I'm not sure if it was intentional, but your verses sound too conversational and it occasionally, although minimally, breaks the fourth wall. Also, reading the "......" in the hook was a little strange. :unsure:

But besides that, dope imagery and keeping the fire blazing, like usual, Anon. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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