A Cold Day In Hell I Feel Good....

[DƎRDYPK]

New piece I wrote called "Even When I'm High"
I have no idea what I was doing with this....
just getting shit off my chest & having fun
I'v never wrote anything like this before....
has that Emo/Funny/Weird/Sexual PK taste all mixed into one


So Take A Read



















[Intro]
Snow falls from the sky on this cold long night
your about to travel threw my mind hold on tight.....

[Verse #1]
I dropped outta school when I realized I aint shit
Sometimes I never had weed So I was sniffing paint bitch!
I wrote a few tunes & I had a few beers
I finished that up quick so what to do here?
keep stepping my game up I'm never gonna change what
I say or do untill I'm blowing out my brains slut
I also can't stand when rappers talking glits & glammer
best believe I can't wait till Weezy hit's the slammer
my dream is to fuck every actress on degrassi
surrounded by 12 year old girls looking trashy
I know it seems wrong but really should I give a fuck?
I was taught to smack bitches, smoke weed & live it up
So if im not kicking rhymes or smoking a spliff
best believe I'm out somewhere choking a bitch
all my life I been loco it's really nothing new
you didn't know that? better get a fucking clue

[Chorus]{singing}
Even when I'm high
Best believe I'm low
Lookin to the sky
Laying in the snow
Even when I die
best believe i'll know
Even when I'm high
Best believe I'm low

[Verse #2]
If I had a million bucks I'd get any girl I wanna
I'd get my dick sucked while i'm puffing marijuana
sneakers & speakers with a stereo to pump it up
even if I'll never live like that so fucking what?
as long as I got my friends & family behind me
I'm pretty sure now that the devil won't find me
so pass me a glass cause the holiday is lonely
All I want for Christmas is one girl to show me
sides of me I never seen. a piece of me I never found
I wanna be with you & have you say "its better now"
every night I lay awake thinkin what to do?
not a second goes by that I don't think of you
I gotta move on though. even if it's hard
this road with no lights. only gets so dark
All my mind is focused on is where I'm gonna go
I really don't know but Imma tell you this though

[Chorus]{singing}
Even when I'm high
Best believe I'm low
Lookin to the sky
Laying in the snow
Even when I die
best believe i'll know
Even when I'm high
Best believe I'm low

[Edge]

nice man, i think u should make another verse cause i like the emotion on it

[DƎRDYPK]

nice man, i think u should make another verse cause i like the emotion on it

I would but it took me forever just to finish the 2nd verse
it's been a while since I wrote
I'm glad you liked it though homie

[Edge]

ur shit got me thinking a little... what u think of this... it kinda goes with it

sometimes i wonder what my worth is
wonder if im worthless, but nobodys perfect
i dont like the judging and all of the labels
all the pressures building, got me so unstable
pains up in my temple shoot down to my navel
weed and alcohol take away than they add to pain
normal in the day, but at night im insane
get so high at night that i barely know my name
whose to blame? i just think 'how'm i gunna make it?'
gettin real stressed, how'm i gunna take it?
smile on my face, im just tryin to fake it
girls go for my heart, but theyr just tryin to break it
but i gotta pull through
do what i gotta do
make another day
fake another way
another forced smile, another fake laugh
keep think bout my future, cant keep thinkin bout the past

id appreciate honest feedback

[DƎRDYPK]

sometimes i wonder what my worth is
wonder if im worthless, but nobodys perfect
i dont like the judging and all of the labels
all the pressures building, got me so unstable
pains up in my temple shoot down to my navel
weed and alcohol take away than they add to pain
normal in the day, but at night im insane
get so high at night that i barely know my name
whose to blame? i just think 'how'm i gunna make it?'
gettin real stressed, how'm i gunna take it?
smile on my face, im just tryin to fake it
girls go for my heart, but theyr just tryin to break it
but i gotta pull through
do what i gotta do
make another day
fake another way
another forced smile, another fake laugh
keep think bout my future, cant keep thinkin bout the past

I like it
your lyrics are pretty good & I see that your fitting multies in there too
just keep at the writing & enjoy what your doing man
stay blazed & stay writing
also hit me up if you ever need a verse for a collab

[Edge]

sometimes i wonder what my worth is
wonder if im worthless, but nobodys perfect
i dont like the judging and all of the labels
all the pressures building, got me so unstable
pains up in my temple shoot down to my navel
weed and alcohol take away than they add to pain
normal in the day, but at night im insane
get so high at night that i barely know my name
whose to blame? i just think 'how'm i gunna make it?'
gettin real stressed, how'm i gunna take it?
smile on my face, im just tryin to fake it
girls go for my heart, but theyr just tryin to break it
but i gotta pull through
do what i gotta do
make another day
fake another way
another forced smile, another fake laugh
keep think bout my future, cant keep thinkin bout the past

I like it
your lyrics are pretty good & I see that your fitting multies in there too
just keep at the writing & enjoy what your doing man
stay blazed & stay writing
also hit me up if you ever need a verse for a collab

word blazing and writing are two of the better things in life lol... im bout to post something in creative writing once i finish it so peep it if u have the chance... and yea id def like to do a collab

[DƎRDYPK]

I'll be sure to peep it