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burnt and bored

Postby Edge » Dec 16th, '09, 08:55

sometimes i kick back, wonder where lifes headed
wonder how i make it, with all this strife imbeded
in my daily rutine, im a rude teen
livin in a crude scene, feud-ing
with parents, teachers, preiets and nuns
pissed they added features to poliecemens' guns
releasin tons of smoke from the cohiba
weed got me seein black and white like a zebra
wouldnt wanna be ya if i wanna beat ya
c ya, better off gettin outta the country
and i got a full team if u ever try to hunt me
im so cunning, hot as the chery on a blunt be
yal just pussy like a cunt be, and i dont play that shit
cause when u start me off, im bound to never quit
what i say just do it, screw it
ya body i chop up and brew it
chew it, swallow and digest
got fans following impressed
and i just begun its not my best, ace up any test
face up to the best, puff out my chest, scare the rest
with a stare of detest, battle hard, never rest
come at u with my best, most loyal, paid assassins
i layed the cash in so theyr down to bash in
brains of brash men, just so time gets to passin
and i aint laughin, i dont like to joke around
so if u dont want trouble, be sure to respect my sound
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: burnt and bored

Postby DƎRDYPK » Dec 16th, '09, 09:03

I'm not very good at leaving feed but....
this was nice :y:
smooth flow & nice lyrics :smoking:
very laid back style you got too
very different :y:

The Edge wrote:c ya, better off gettin outta the country
and i got a full team if u ever try to hunt me
im so cunning, hot as the chery on a blunt be
yal just pussy like a cunt be, and i dont play that shit
cause when u start me off, im bound to never quit


was my favorite part of the piece :b:
I don't know why....I just liked it :sweating:
keep at it homie :8)
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Re: burnt and bored

Postby Edge » Dec 16th, '09, 09:11

thanks man, i apprecate it... definently hit me up sometime to do something together
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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