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bet u'd bump this.

Postby tjb » Dec 17th, '09, 01:45

i seem to be ripping at the seams
slipping to what i used to be
lose the swag, the clothes and the devilish grin
turn around to the start an begin again
ive lost my touch lost a bit to much
havent brokin a leg in years but i need a crutch
loook.,, man ive lost my push
the inspiration to go even when the times get hard as it gets
reviews tell me im clueless/ tell me my lyrics is garbage
had to start sellin my shit to afford payin my mortage
the bills are killin me while the pills are thrillin me
ganja must have been my gateway least its wat the medias tellin me
whatever forever as long as the medias selling me
but make a turn down the wrong road its forever a felony
one balloon pops, your whole career stops
the ball was the money its long gone been dropped
an lemme tell ya, if you fall now its a far way down
better open that parachute when you hit the ground
cuz life is pretty hard your wont just bounce
i sure didnt when my girlfriend kicked me out
swift transtion, straight onto stone steps from sitting on the couch
godamn bitch, that was my house!
an i aint fibbin get out before i break both ya fibulas
take a spoon an scrape marrow straight out of your tibia
that'll show em before i blow up again
im almost out of energy my strenght an my moneys spent
get home feel like a vegetable almost completely dead
i feel like a famous novel but i already been read.
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Re: bet u'd bump this.

Postby gutawafang » Dec 17th, '09, 01:56

I can't flow.
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Re: bet u'd bump this.

Postby Spyder » Dec 17th, '09, 02:05

gutawafang wrote:I can't flow.


sounds like a personal problem ;)
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Re: bet u'd bump this.

Postby gutawafang » Dec 17th, '09, 02:06

however I can flow after I turned on Music Box Instrumental!!! :o

It's cool man. :flower:
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