Dubious Story

[mcZu]

Beat used

It’s mid summer, charm oven mitt gunner
Mid section designed for my hunger
Cruising mid evil under the sun, her-
Allure reminds me of medieval lumber-
Craft.. Still in it’s prime, thunder,
Hatch, steel and it’s a game of mind
A game of mine, so I don’t mind to play
My mind plays, so it’s time to sway
My way into her demeanor
Like a child describing a bad girl, I mean her
We shook hands, wow, she’s a witch..
I had to make moves like Von Clausewitz
To get near her, ouch, she a bitch?
Nah, she aint anywhere near one
So I made sure to bend the rear, done..
Now I can view it in hindsight
Behind the limelight, hiding sites
Introduced myself, hiking sites
We moving to the top in this convo
And I made sure to be her convoy
Like a con I got her to take of her top, yessir
While in the elevator going to the top, ‘undress her’
Going through my mind, sigh
We stumble to her room, venetian blinds
Closed, so she pulled out a bottle for a toast
After a drink or 4..
We started going full throttle on the floor
After the sensational choir
We acquired a certain sense of fire
Our senses fired an aura much higher
Than orbital signs, her..
Clothes all over the floor, suspension war
I told her to lea’ mo’ like long expensive cars
..We proceeded to rest for the night
Her hand on my chest all night
I checked my watch under some white light
Then fell asleep with a sign of light-
Tiredness in my mind, right
Yeah, me and her, we exed out
‘Till the morning after I blacked out
Waking up realizing it’s my ex lying on the couch
Next to me, ouch..

[Emadyville]

Dope story telling, very well done, ending was a great twist

[BILI]

This was dope homie,I really enjoyed it

[mcZu]

Dope story telling, very well done, ending was a great twist

Thanks D.Dubs, 'preciate it, man. Glad you liked it.

This was dope homie,I really enjoyed it

Thanks BILI, 'preciate it, man. Thanks for checking.

[Spyder]

D.Dubs
anyhow, liked it man. some spots the rhyming was pretty basic but not that important ina piece like this. i loved the rhyme sceme esp in the begging. and the ending was tight

[mcZu]

D.Dubs
anyhow, liked it man. some spots the rhyming was pretty basic but not that important ina piece like this. i loved the rhyme sceme esp in the begging. and the ending was tight

Thanks Spydie, 'preciate my fellow General.

And D.Dubs is Emady's rap name.

[Slimm]

Entertaining read, loved it

[mcZu]

Entertaining read, loved it

Thank you Slimmmeister, it's an honour to have you reading my verse. Appreciate it.