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Death Within

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 19th, '09, 19:00

Coming from the ground, now I'm running with the town
track behind tracks, and gunning with the sound
back to go rap, and stunning all the crowd
wackness gets smack, I'm blunted and I'm loud
I'm a pacifist, boxer, rapping this
activist cracking discs with active spit
rapping with miraculous adjectives
smacking lips of wack, rat-a-tat savageness
Ever try to step in my way, get blasted
how you gonna battle when your brain is average
Every rhyme I write is thermite, I burn mics
don't turn ripe, cause you get road like turnpikes
absurd right? don't give a fuck, ya nerves hype
stab you in the chest, and the rest are burned white
microphone termite, killing verbs like
my pencil was a knife, and the words are third Reich
You faggots, don't speak, like Helen Keller
when a ''stop'' ''sign'' is in front of her face, you fellas
acapella or not, my flow never stops
letters drop, killing everything in sight, cause I'm a better cop
When I rip it up, different fucks get split up
sick enough, to kill a pregnant lady from lips up
ahead of my time, and my balls are portals
when I jerk off, times lines are poured too
flow this track, word to micheal phelps
and if I aint crazy enough my psycho helps
Fuck a punch in, punch in, all you fuckin' munchkins
thrust them, slice them on the back, they are nothing
Rush in, genocide the people like Stalin
you lose on the stage worse then Sarah Palin
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Death Within

Postby nasty » Dec 19th, '09, 19:12

:y: nice
but palin and stalin don't rhyme
you glass chins
i'll snap shins
and strap you to turntables you fables
now let's see who can sit and spin
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Re: Death Within

Postby classthe_king » Dec 19th, '09, 19:38

nasty wrote::y: nice
but palin and stalin don't rhyme


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You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Death Within

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 19th, '09, 23:15

nasty wrote::y: nice
but palin and stalin don't rhyme

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LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Death Within

Postby DƎRDYPK » Dec 19th, '09, 23:18

Very nice Angel :y:
I can imagine you making this into audio :worship:
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Re: Death Within

Postby BILI » Dec 19th, '09, 23:43

Damn it man,you always drop some dope stuff,its awesome as always :y:
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Re: Death Within

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 20th, '09, 00:36

nice flow, you took a step back from lyrical and imagery and went with raw violent and street, this seemed audio oriented, I liked it Anonymous, keep it up :y:
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Re: Death Within

Postby nasty » Dec 21st, '09, 04:42

MC Anonymous wrote:
nasty wrote::y: nice
but palin and stalin don't rhyme

:unsure:

they look the same but it's palin (pale in) and stalin (stall in)
you glass chins
i'll snap shins
and strap you to turntables you fables
now let's see who can sit and spin
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