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I'm Going In

Postby mcZu » Dec 20th, '09, 01:20

I was bored, so I decided to write a sixteen to that I'm Going In beat from Drake.
Just a lil' punch-line-wordplay-brag piece..

Demeanors are wide recievers and I am eager if ya ask me
To pop fakers like chris when I be riding y'all crash like Chris Henry
Shit's drastically coming to an end see
I would like to reverse IT, however it's Dead And Gone
Beheaded and then some, I know it's demanded like ransom
The man y'all hear is sick, words like vomit
I'm in here to do harm, my environment an armpit
I'm armed with lyrics and a club to fight like Brad Pitt
While I be dropping you brats in a pit like Husain
I'll be climbing up fast to the top call me Usain
Never bold, I'm hot yet cold call me may weather Lloyd
I make y'all check my rhymes when I punch like Mayweather Floyd
You may like after june wish to reign like weather by Monroe
The first issue, I don't play, boy ask Marilyn Monroe
I'm going in with a hero attitude, a javelin Ando
Antrax in every letter man, I haven't even started, it'll be your end, though..
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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Re: I'm Going In

Postby BILI » Dec 20th, '09, 01:25

:o wow,man impressive,yeah the wordplay is dope,like that T.I. line :y: ,it flowed nice,and some dope rhymes in it 2

check my new piece wit Nimbus if you want to
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Re: I'm Going In

Postby mcZu » Dec 20th, '09, 02:16

BILI wrote::o wow,man impressive,yeah the wordplay is dope,like that T.I. line :y: ,it flowed nice,and some dope rhymes in it 2

check my new piece wit Nimbus if you want to

Thanks BILI, 'preciate the feed.
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