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Re: Stephanie

Postby Edge » Dec 20th, '09, 21:45

nice... u should build on it though and make it longer :y: u already got the start of a story there, u should finish
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Re: Stephanie

Postby Solace » Dec 25th, '09, 03:52

Damn dope. Thought it was tight. Flow was nice, multies were dope. Obviously I read it as Eminem would've rapped it in my mind cause its obviously influenced. Negative is the obvious Eminem influence. The ground Proof is sound... asleep = luls.
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