Interrogation

[Edge]

nice multis, some seemed forced but most seemed to come naturally... it flowed nice too

[Solace]

This felt very Eminem influenced right here:

i'm sat on my butt hole, fed up with the infatuation
if you fax my babe son, i will come and smack your face in
and pack away, leaving you more scarred than an act of Jason

Makes me think of some Slim Shady LP kinda flow.

Overall nice though, I enjoyed the flow and multies and your rhyme scheme was pretty dope. And another thing, it wasnt about love

[Edge]

i felt that whole eminem vibe thing too

[lilrossy]

inzane rhymes man. flowed really good, nice multi's, great use of vocab. awesome. i liked it.
good work, keep it up.

[Arabian Shady]

that was wiked, this was dope

pulling up my trousers higher, cocked, i'm ready, 'bout to fire
count to five .. take off your blindfold, and i'ma gouge your eyes
you're now surprised? well you ent coming out alive

i imagined that shit for real