Broken Wings

[mcZu]

I’m sitting, armed and damn dazed
Lifting my arms up, hands touch my face
Shifting my position at such a fast pace
Wishing I wasn’t thinking at such a dashed rate
Misplaced, memories going through my hemispheres
This place, me and you, is henny clear
Dimmed days, the light is offending fear
Off of mere thoughts ‘bout cash, dear-
God, I paused the Cashmere Thoughts cut
As I cleared my thoughts I stood up
Looked up in the mirror, it’s getting clearer
I can’t bare the reflection, I fear a
Deep affection effecting the rear view
Hindsight is a blind light nearing you
Hiding the bright limelight right behind you
No signs of past assets viewed
So I ask where I’m at with a few
Remarks of tokens in a self loathing wind
I’m an angel with broken wings
Is what I see after I’ve awoken the real thing
In the mirror made of steel ink
Describing the feelings that are sealed in...

[Fa-Q]

Thise last four songs are the best...this is a dope concept and would be a good full song...good imagery

[Arabian Shady]

that was dope man, excellent bit of imagery,
sick shit

[mcZu]

Thise last four songs are the best...this is a dope concept and would be a good full song...good imagery

Thanks Fa-Q, I might finish it.

Can feel it and sense it. Very descriptive. Full with emotion, which is always good in my books. This is what I call lyrically poetic. In terms of contents quite complex too.


Oh by the way I loved the drawing, from before.

Thanks Pink, appreciate it, and I'm glad you liked the drawing.

that was dope man, excellent bit of imagery,
sick shit

Thanks AS, I appreciate it man.

[Solace]

Damn Zu that was really good. The imagery was excellent and your vocab. was ace. I thought flow was best here, I just love this flow:

Shifting my position at such a fast pace
Wishing I wasn’t thinking at such a dashed rate
Misplaced, memories going through my hemispheres
This place, me and you, is henny clear
Dimmed days, the light is offending fear
Off of mere thoughts ‘bout cash, dear-
God, I paused the Cashmere Thoughts cut

Great work, keep at it.

[Yah-hah]

yeah homie imagery is on point. Wanna see more when its over lol

[mcZu]

Damn Zu that was really good. The imagery was excellent and your vocab. was ace. I thought flow was best here, I just love this flow:

Shifting my position at such a fast pace
Wishing I wasn’t thinking at such a dashed rate
Misplaced, memories going through my hemispheres
This place, me and you, is henny clear
Dimmed days, the light is offending fear
Off of mere thoughts ‘bout cash, dear-
God, I paused the Cashmere Thoughts cut

Great work, keep at it.

Thanks Omar, 'preciate it bro.

yeah homie imagery is on point. Wanna see more when its over lol

Thanks Yah, yeah I'll definitly post it if I decide to finish it.