keystyle

[Edge]

It seems like everybody doesn’t like to give feedback
sometimes theyl read that, but never will feed that
believe that, honest critique is nice as a weed stack
Criticism helps, I just wanna know, If u guys like what I drop
It doesn’t matter if u like it or not, or think that its hot
If the flow is choppy, or the lyrics are weak
Or if u feel, its impossible to spit on a beat
Or if u think that the punch lines are corny
Go ahead and say “the wordplay bored me”
Id rather get shown the right path
I could learn, than I wont write trash
Clean my lyrics up like a nice bath
And if u like it, thanks, appreciating the love
But I want negative too, like the hatin above
But don’t just bash my piece like “oh that’s wack”
At least put in critique, when u give bad feedback

it took me like 5 minutes to do.. to every1 who has given me honest feedback thanks
and if u havnt please do... i usually put time into them and would appreciate it... thanks

[Relapse.LP]

I can kind of tell less effort was put into the piece, but there were still some multies and it flowed decently, so I'll give you credit for that.

[Edge]

I can kind of tell less effort was put into the piece, but there were still some multies and it flowed decently, so I'll give you credit for that.

haha thanks... this way more of a way to just prove a point...cause a couple months ago, when i first started readin shit on here, ppl always commented on every1s raps.... but i feel like every1s raps dont get as much feed anymore

[Solace]

Flow was choppy, some areas had a perfect flow and then it just ended so fast and the next line felt irregular to flow. Good meaning to it.

It seems like everybody doesn’t like to give feedback
sometimes theyl read that, but never will feed that

I do that all the time, in fact I wasnt even gunna feed this hahah.

Clean my lyrics up like a nice bath

I think that that punchline was corny.

Keep at it dude, you a good beginner here

[Edge]

lol thanks man, glad u decided to feed... this isnt tryin to b lyrical... if u wanna see how i actually rap, peep my other shit, this was out of frustration haha... and i agree that line was corney haha but sometimes i like corney