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Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 24th, '09, 05:04

[Verse 1 - BILI]
Tryin to make for livin wit CDs,for my only mother
Me and my homies,we were MCs like any other
But fuck it,everything changed that sad day
See it was the day when death said "hey"
Fuckin beefs from the past came to get me
Now I`m gonna feel the flame that Satan`ll set me
On,its time for me to be gone,to be all alone
I`m falling into a dark hole,into a unknown
Now I`m in front of Satan,this is sequence of my sins
I`m being punished by this Death Prince
I`m still holdin on,and screamin:"Only God Can Judge Me"
We were in a death row,I coudnt even budge G
I was forced to sign a fucking damned deal
I felt cold steel,now I couldnt even hold fear
It felt like Me Againt The World,like its just me
Like a Divine Comedy,I was in a circle three

[Chorus X2]
Sweet serenades surrender souls, Satan sings this melody so cunning
Chains bound to wrists, blade through heart; a forced soliloquy of judgement

[Verse 2 - Relapse]
From my genesis to expiration, I was the nemesis of entire nations
Rhythm is my breath, synonym of death; a menace to life's creations
Carried a fake identity to make enemies, called the betrayed entity
Blood on hands, "red-handed"; police gut my glands, a blade enters me
Death smiles with crimson eyes of disguised calm, written lies on my palm
Sinful debts reversing, I begged for mercy; He permitted Spite to respond
Pride, Envy, Greed tattooed on my chest, my soul's renewed and possessed
Flames within me, shaming sins be whispering; am I through with the test?
Spirit torn, I scream with excruciating pain, still awaiting to be slain
Quivering paroxysms delivering Terror's prism, creating Death's sixth reign
Demons chuckle, some dissenting with scours, some tempting with power
Visions of dominance, decisions of prominence; no resenting this very hour
I reach for the promised riches, then proudly speak of my modest wishes
Devil giggles with grin, trident whittles my skin; weak with the oddest itches
On the blade piercing my flesh, a letter from 'Lapse and BILI be hoverin'
It says Best Wishes to Satan, Yours Truly; I laugh; soliloquy of judgement

[Chorus X2]
Sweet serenades surrender souls, Satan sings this melody so cunning
Chains bound to wrists, blade through heart; a forced soliloquy of judgement
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 24th, '09, 06:17

Dope collab but come on BILI I've read better from you...you need to expand your vocabulary and use better Multis...I liked bits of your verse but not all of it...come on man

And Relapse good as usual...actually above par from what I expact from you...keep it up homie...

7.5/10
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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 24th, '09, 06:19

Fa-Q wrote:Dope collab but come on BILI I've read better from you...you need to expand your vocabulary and use better Multis...I liked bits of your verse but not all of it...come on man

And Relapse good as usual...actually above par from what I expact from you...keep it up homie...

7.5/10

Taking shots? :boxing:






Nah, just kidding. Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it, bro. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 24th, '09, 06:24

Lol taking shots...I was just telling it how it was...I don't want beef...unless its with J roc
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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 24th, '09, 06:27

Fa-Q wrote:Lol taking shots...I was just telling it how it was...I don't want beef...unless its with J roc

I'm kidding, haha. You hating on J Roc? On second thought, don't answer my question and spam the topic. :tounge2:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby BILI » Dec 24th, '09, 13:03

Damn it,I think I have writers block :(


ps:now when I read my verse again,its lame as fuck
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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 24th, '09, 15:11

BILI wrote:Damn it,I think I have writers block :(


ps:now when I read my verse again,its lame as fuck

Everybody goes through it man...just keep writing cause we all know you're good...you'll get outta it
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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby BILI » Dec 24th, '09, 15:26

Fa-Q wrote:
BILI wrote:Damn it,I think I have writers block :(


ps:now when I read my verse again,its lame as fuck

Everybody goes through it man...just keep writing cause we all know you're good...you'll get outta it

thx man,Ima smoke more weed right after Christmas :D
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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 24th, '09, 21:32

Bump.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Tash8 » Dec 24th, '09, 21:36

good piece from both of you.. the second guy came a bit stronger (no homo).. though the first guy i liked urs, it had a lot of enjoyment...

i can't wait to hear this recorded!
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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 24th, '09, 21:42

Tash8 wrote:good piece from both of you.. the second guy came a bit stronger (no homo).. though the first guy i liked urs, it had a lot of enjoyment...

i can't wait to hear this recorded!

Thanks for feedback. Means a lot. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 25th, '09, 03:49

Bump.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 27th, '09, 21:00

Bumpp
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Soliloquy of Judgement (Abaddon) - Relapse ft. BILI

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 29th, '09, 07:50

Yeah yall I dug it. BILI just gotta get oughta tht damn block homie lol. Relapse sick cunning kind of verse. dig the bolds on like terror and all that was dope. Chorus was rough but dope concept yall
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