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by **Requiem** » Dec 24th, '09, 07:34

Self doubt, self pity, man i feel shitty,
i need to get out of this city, and wallow in my misery,
i used to be in the lead, now when i'm finished b,
the mortuary is where you will visit me.

i'm sick to the finish, cuz i overdose on spinach,
but the green turns me evil, like the grinch in two minutes.
dennis the menace, mind muddled like Finnish,
i'm a psychopath-ical man who speaks English.
i can turn a stone into a conservative squeamish,
when i pop his eyes out like "hey, do you see this?"
a fetis, i'll make an athiest believe this.
in the blink of an eye, like the rock when i squeeze it.

first one's pretty depressing, the other's off the wall. feed appreciated :y:

Website · by **Solace** » Dec 24th, '09, 20:40

Self doubt, self pity, man i feel shitty,
i need to get out of this city, and wallow in my misery,
i used to be in the lead, now when i'm finished b,
the mortuary is where you will visit me.

I dont find that at all depressing...Was wayyy to general, not descriptive...and it was...4 lines :unsure:

i'm sick to the finish, cuz i overdose on spinach,
but the green turns me evil, like the grinch in two minutes.
dennis the menace, mind muddled like Finnish,
i'm a psychopath-ical man who speaks English.
i can turn a stone into a conservative squeamish,
when i pop his eyes out like "hey, do you see this?"
a fetis, i'll make an athiest believe this.
in the blink of an eye, like the rock when i squeeze it.

Started off extremely weak, built up at around "i'm a psychopath-ical man who speaks English.". Was decent.