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You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby brokenpillz » Dec 26th, '09, 10:31

If you disrespect my intellect ill disconnect your internet
Get intimate and lick her lips until my dick is stiff as shit
Stick it in her slit and split until my shit is dripping sick
Rip her clit with bits of sticks that chip the skin until its thin

Yeah son! lol

Just fucking around...if you have some bars to follow that up post em

Idk if theres a thread like this, but if there is my bad.

If not, lets all flow some stupid shit lol

EDIT : move to the creative forum
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 26th, '09, 10:49

This belongs in the Creative Writing section not in Eminem Section
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby brokenpillz » Dec 26th, '09, 10:51

ok Moderator move it to the right section
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 26th, '09, 12:41

no hate but that was pretty wack :8)
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby BILI » Dec 26th, '09, 12:44

I only liked 1st line,even tho its corny 2
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby gutawafang » Dec 26th, '09, 13:20

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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby LLockhart86 » Dec 26th, '09, 15:58

GibbzyTrShady wrote:no hate but that was pretty wack :8)


Lyrics sound good when spit, not on paper. Or screen for that matter.....
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby BILI » Dec 26th, '09, 16:02

llockhart86 wrote:
GibbzyTrShady wrote:no hate but that was pretty wack :8)


Lyrics sound good when spit, not on paper. Or screen for that matter.....

are you retarded??We did spit them,and they`re still not that good
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby dR3 » Dec 26th, '09, 16:03

Where are the mods, dayum... :unsure:
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby DaKidLilj » Dec 26th, '09, 16:53

Am I da only one who see's Eminem's Infinite flow all over dat?
Eminem - Infinite

Ayo, my pen and paper cause a chain reaction
To get your brain relaxing, a zany acting maniac in action
A brainiac in fact son, you mainly lack attraction
You look insanely whack when just a fraction of my tracks spun
My rhyming skills got you climbing hills
I travel through your mind into you spine like siren drills
I'm sliming grills of roaches, with sprayed on disinfectants
Twist the necks of rappers 'til their spinal column disconnects
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby slimsoxshady » Dec 26th, '09, 17:19

Relapse has inspired so many lol
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby Evil-Genius » Dec 26th, '09, 18:30

brokenpillz wrote:If you disrespect my intellect ill disconnect your internet
Get intimate and lick her lips until my dick is stiff as shit
Stick it in her slit and split until my shit is dripping sick
Rip her clit with bits of sticks that chip the skin until its thin

Yeah son! lol

Just fucking around...if you have some bars to follow that up post em

Idk if theres a thread like this, but if there is my bad.

If not, lets all flow some stupid shit lol

EDIT : move to the creative forum

What an idiot
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And all you got from it is post your stupid lyrics?
To be moved. :angry:
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby brokenpillz » Dec 27th, '09, 03:40

DaKidLilj wrote:Am I da only one who see's Eminem's Infinite flow all over dat?

i dont even rap LOL yeah those bars were wack as fuc...but as a rap fan i like studying rappers craft and eminem has a very complex rhyming pattern.
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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 27th, '09, 03:49

brokenpillz wrote:
DaKidLilj wrote:Am I da only one who see's Eminem's Infinite flow all over dat?

i dont even rap LOL yeah those bars were wack as fuc...but as a rap fan i like studying rappers craft and eminem has a very complex rhyming pattern.


So Your just starting out?? then take more time writing your rhymes man it wasnt at all bad for someone who does'nt rap so keep at it man
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Im Just Slowly Takin Over'


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Re: You Got Bars Son?!?!?

Postby brokenpillz » Dec 27th, '09, 03:57

GibbzyTrShady wrote:
brokenpillz wrote:
DaKidLilj wrote:Am I da only one who see's Eminem's Infinite flow all over dat?

i dont even rap LOL yeah those bars were wack as fuc...but as a rap fan i like studying rappers craft and eminem has a very complex rhyming pattern.


So Your just starting out?? then take more time writing your rhymes man it wasnt at all bad for someone who does'nt rap so keep at it man


thanks man

yeah my boy spits he has his crew and shit, so sometimes when were jus chillin drinkin we start cyphering and they tell me im good but idk how serious i take it. i like rapping but i dont write ya know? i just bullshit....but maybe one day. if i start coming up with cool concepts and find a way to connect each bar to the next (which seems to be alot of young rappers issue, staying on topic) than ill consider it for sure man...

do u rap?
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