Slimsoxshady vs. 2sDay (Open for Voting)

[slimsoxshady]

8 lines, no restrictions

It's never too late for 2sDay to go and commute race to Doomsday
Beat his ass and sent a pic of his bruised face to Newsday
Caught in the shuffle, watch me cut and start flipping this Joker
A poker faced gofer goin down like he's digging for sulfur
When it comes to battling, I just dump and batter him
Damn, he stinks so much he got the skunks all scatterin
Look up at me Madeline while my flow humps the javelin
Traveling, rhymes bump his saddle then, jump down tackle him

[2sDay]

Nice one. I like it
Remember not to taking it seriously man. I still like you

Are you gonna keep embarassing yourself or diss me buddy?,
Put the pad on the shelf, and take a bath your face is all muddy,
You Kiss your slut of a mom with that trout-smealling mouth?,
Your a bum man, your mouth smells like cum, here have some gum,
So to sum it up 2sDay is a young lad, with a rad fast tounge,
Whos rhymes are so offensive, we just might see you hung,
Don't be so sensitive hun..., Dont' run away boy this is fun,
When 2sDay spits his flow, The sun glows, and the haters go,

[Solace]

You Kiss your slut of a mom with that trout-smealling mouth?,
Your a bum man, your mouth smells like cum, here have some gum,

Talk about Eminem bite.

[slimsoxshady]

you sir are on chew syrum

[Spyder]

Are you gonna keep embarassing yourself or diss me buddy?,
Put the pad on the shelf, and take a bath your face is all muddy,
You Kiss your slut of a mom with that trout-smealling mouth?,
Your a bum man, your mouth smells like cum, here have some gum,
So to sum it up 2sDay is a young lad, with a rad fast tounge,
Whos rhymes are so offensive, we just might see you hung,
Don't be so sensitive hun..., Dont' run away boy this is fun,
When 2sDay spits his flow, The sun glows, and the haters go,

line 2 - doesnt exactly have a personal or punch effect. saying his face is muddy didnt make my mouth drop.
line 3+4 solace says is a bite, i dont member but never do that in battles or CW
line 3 and 4 dont rhyme, thus knocking down the flow
line 8 doesnt rhyme with line 7.

pm me if youd like some help, you have yet to use nameplay,wordplay,personals or multies.
dont worry bro youll get there

vote Sox

[Solace]

He bit from Big Weenie (hahaa that just sounds so funny)

You're droolin, you have tooth decay
Your mouth is open, you're disgusting
What the fuck you eat for lunch
A bunch of sweets or something, what?
You munch a bunch of Crunch 'N Munch?
Your tooth is rotten to the gum
Your breath stinks, wanna chew some gum?

You Kiss your slut of a mom with that trout-smealling mouth?,
Your a bum man, your mouth smells like cum, here have some gum,"

[Spyder]

bit form big weenie :lauhging:

and gotchya, tisk tisk

[Spyder]

Overkast

stop posting things from way back when because your trying to proove you were here

[GibbzyTrShady]

not sure but isnt the line "you sir are on truth serum"?

[Solace]

not sure but isnt the line "you sir are on truth serum"?

Yeah

[Spyder]

good for you, you can look to see who got a name change

[Solace]

Overkast

stop posting things from way back when because your trying to proove you were here

....his rap name... I'm sorry Slim313Shady lmao

wow fuck you're creepy

[Spyder]

^i know right:laughing:

hey solace vote on me vs sanktum please