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Fa-Q - Never Enough (Solo)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 27th, '09, 21:33

Well I did a collab with Zu and Spyder but here is the original song...enjoy



Will I rise up in ranks, time can only tell,
But if I die prematurely, it'll be a lonely hell,
I was told by a close friend, never share your glory,
fuck gold chains, expensive clothes, wear your story,
I learned, no matter what respect foes,
except those, that step on toes,
They prey on you, then whoops there your rep goes,
All you guys sell out for peppy hoes,
Dressed to the nines, in their preppy clothes,
Giving up, if you think I'll do that you're dead wrong,
And this is for all you doubting fucks, don't think I'm headstrong,
I do it just to get away from, these fags and bitches,
I only do it, if I somehow, go from rags to riches,
But I see that as just a simple, figure of speech,
I know I've got more boxes to check, things bigger to reach,
I have no confidence, its all negative doubt,
But I'll sure as fuck keep fighting, til my legs give out,


This world could give me the world, that's never enough,
I was taught, don't ever give up, that's never enough,
Never enough, I could be clever and tough,
But I ask myself, will that ever be enough,


There's the edge of the cliff, I'm ready to jump so here goes,
Forgetting all phobias, oh no, my fear shows,
All my songs illustrated by my superior flows,
I know I'm above all, so I'll turn mere foes,
into nothing but sad friends and peers exposed,
Here comes the light at the end so I'm near and close,
I hope before I rest in peace, I'll confess to least,
To all my crimes, all the small times, where I thought of death,
And it brought my breath, to quick short inhales,
On missions, I tried on, I abort and then fail,
I dream, and dream, and now I'm wide awake,
You conceited fucks, I got some pride to take,
I lose it as soon as I hear your voice, your clear choice,
You faggots will never respect the greatest,
You're ignore all the true artists, and accept the fakest,
I see the end is near, so I put my hands on my face,
Knowing that all I worked for, my plans are gone, erased,


This world could give me the world, that's never enough,
I was taught, don't ever give up, that's never enough,
Never enough, I could be clever and tough,
But I ask myself, will that ever be enough,


I tried to count my blessing, but I doubt guessing,
Will, to all of you guilty fucks, amount to confessing,
Let me ask you something, have you ever felt so inadequate,
That no matter what you do, you felt you had to quit,
I feel hurt, like I need more than heroin to ease the pain,
Its like all the worlds lust I need, just to please my brain,
Its like to qench my thirst I need to seize the rain,
It hurts to even stand up for myself, like my knees are vain,
I have to make sure, no matter what, I don't diddle my time,
That every riddle and rhyme, is as sour as the middle of a lime,
That I steal what you steal from me, and treat it as a little crime,
Its like I'm trying to fight through all your faggots, grit and slime,
I have no will, to oppose on shocked enemies,
Against foes with cocked semis, in close proximities,
I'm gonna prove to every last one of you, that my broken heart,
Which you shattered into a thousand pieces, is more spoken art,
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Re: Fa-Q - Never Enough (Solo)

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 27th, '09, 23:18

Yeah man I always dug this one. Line pink pointed out :worship:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Fa-Q - Never Enough (Solo)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 27th, '09, 23:27

Thanks PINK :) and Jus
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Re: Fa-Q - Never Enough (Solo)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 28th, '09, 23:39

Bump
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Re: Fa-Q - Never Enough (Solo)

Postby Solace » Dec 29th, '09, 00:14

This is dope man. Definitely felt the 3rd verse the most, like seriously no doubt they obliterated the other 2. The first and second verses I liked equally. You ended the entire thing real good giving the reader something to think about. Chorus is tight...I find those hard so major props to you.

This is my favourite part:

Let me ask you something, have you ever felt so inadequate,
That no matter what you do, you felt you had to quit,
I feel hurt, like I need more than heroin to ease the pain,
Its like all the worlds lust I need, just to please my brain,
Its like to qench my thirst I need to seize the rain,
It hurts to even stand up for myself, like my knees are vain,
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Re: Fa-Q - Never Enough (Solo)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 29th, '09, 05:38

Thanks Solace...
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