Smithy Vs CronicJon

[Element.]

Waitin for cronic jon.

[ChronicJon]

this is chronicjon spiitin to smithy, real quickly,
if you cant take the heat son, ill slap you wicha moms big ass titty,
hmm, gettin pissied off, then ill finish you off,
take it like a man, dont overdose like heath leger did,
and tell your mother, that i love her,
shes a greate fuck, you should be grateful for that c***,
so hit me back, witcha best, put me to the test,
and ima keepin sucking on your mamas BIG CHEST.

your turn smithy

[Element.]

Yo dude i was ment to go first, ass wipe.

My mums chest or TIT, wtf you on you cant get any of it/
and how will that offend me, i dont give a shit about my family/
i thought this was ment to be about me, attacking me, wacking me/
trying to smack me, giving you a chance here,please stop draggin me/

Tryin to show ya skills, illa like eminem overdosed on pills/
like ya lyrics just spills, till ya lyrics dry out and you/
may even get better, send me a letter/
i will never forget ya, i will come back at ya/



i dont think mine was that good tbh its like 3 in the mornin in the UK here

[Element.]

please vote..

break down your votes.

[Spyder]

hmm idk

Flow - Chronic
Multies - none
rhymes - none... some of the lines didnt even rhyme
structure - none which made the flow hard
complexty - none
personals - none
other - chronic

seemed like smithy flipped the verse a bit

[Element.]

we was allowed to flip, and tbh talkin about my mum i really dont give a dam so its no punch to me, my mum kicked me out.

[ChronicJon]

so is that all the votes or what?

[Element.]

its 5 votes or 3:0 is KO.. more need to vote.

[Edge]

tbh i didnt like either... no multis in either or personals or anything like that... also some lines didnt rhyme and thats wack... i aint even gunna vote cause i couldnt read them both... but keep at it

[Element.]

yeah tbh this is the worst one ive done. so no one else vote both sucks so no point i will do another some othertime with him i should be better then.

[Spyder]

yeah tbh this is the worst one ive done. so no one else vote both sucks so no point i will do another some othertime with him i should be better then.

ight its locked