wonder

[tjb]

i am.. a bomb dropper
a curb stompin earthquake
cant even contenplate my word or ya mind breaks
haters even favor me when my beats shake...
there entire household this of the many hundred thousand bumping homes
an other fist pumpin million straight out of tha jersey shore
this aint for the glory, the glory or the pain
this is to make moms an pops' go insane
pop themselves off/ heads in shame
this is my game call it modern warfare... 2
keep your eyes glues to the 82 inch tube/
watch me school/ get abused like joe jackson with kids
plus a razor blade
so whether or not you got a pussy/ you got a slit
your at ya pit/ shittin yourself at wits end
last stand no more attack gotta deefend
dying is just a reacurrin trend
cuz when i come back your gonna bend like rubber bands
have you so stretched an wrecked your gonna look like rubber man
put you double the standard six feet under
im sick im king kong i am the 8th world wonder

[Fa-Q]

Not good man....first off use commas instead of /'s cause its just easier to read. And I can tell just by reading this you are just starting out but use a bigger vocabulary then simple words and simple metaphors. Talk to Solace or MCZu about writing. Use more multis and try to structure your pieces better. Keep writing tho...don't let me keep you from that

[tjb]

beginner? nah man im just to rusty