Slimsoxshady vs Solace

[slimsoxshady]

8 lines, no flips

Watch me wild out on his ass like state park bushes
Then leave his girlfriend wetter than great shark pussy
It's your last stand, I'll leave you paralyzed waist down
You'll be in some Major Pain like the rapper from H-town (chamilli)
Grow up already and stop giving dick to Kirby
You ain't at my level boy, I'm higher than Brittany Murphy
They say talk is cheap but I'm dropping G's cuz my words are expensive
He tryina mouth off I'm hearing mouse caughs, like a vet nurse I'ma end this

[Solace]

Dope verse

I will plead the fifth after I beat this clip into your weakling wit,
You're probably twice my age, I still defeat your little ego shit,
Lyrically I will cut this man, slice and dice, he can't touch my land,
Look at this punk's username, honestly obviously he's just a Stan,
Your lyrics suck, you act like I fear it much, oh such a scary man,
When I'm done with this faggot he ain't coming from a merry land,
I'm going all out, you're probably gunna pull a Trice and ball out.
Cut off ya balls, ouch. You win, I'll doubt, regretting your call out.

I bolded merry land just in case yall didnt get it..he lives in Maryland....get it?
Obie Trice has a song called Ballout..you get the line now?

[Spyder]

hmmmmmmm

Flow - Solace
Multies - Solace
Vocab - None
Punches - Sox
Complexity - None
personals - Solace i guess
rhymes- Solace
Other - Sox, wet sharks line

Solace wins, but not the best battle from either of you
sox you got me in the first round, betta step up your game

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Flow - Shady
Multies - Shady
Vocabulary - None
Punches - Shady
Complexity - Shady
Personals - Solace
Rhymes - Solace
Other - Shady

Slimsoxshady takes this one for me, because it was overall more entertaining to read and it seemed a little more consistent. Solace's verse, although good, seemed much too focused on multies and sounded a little like Eminem if you flowed it out loud. The "Lyrically I'll cut this man" was a little corny as well.

Overall, good job. I was surprised by slimsoxshady, but both of you could have done better, I think.

1-1

[slimsoxshady]

sox you got me in the first round, betta step up your game

i know, it would suck to get knocked out of the first round of your own tournament

[Spyder]

:lauhging:
i cant wait man good luck
its starting tommorow our battle is on tuesday

[Solace]

Bump, bump, bump it up!

[2sDay]

im not gonna vote cuz i got a beef with solace but i want shady to win.

[Solace]

I don't really care who wins, I think he's going to win because I'm bad at battle raps (punchlines specifically which are what makes one good at it) and he did some pretty nice ones there.

[Solace]

[slimsoxshady]

stoping whoring urself Solace..jeez
they obviously don't care about us

[Solace]

its all good its all good

*slits throat

y'all made me do it

[BILI]

Structure-Solace
Flow-Solace
Rhymes-Solace
Personals-Solace
Punchlines-Sox
Complexity-none
Other-Sox

4:2 for Solace

[Solace]

Finally someone fucking votes

2 to 1, I'm winning

[slimsoxshady]

honestly I hate these "categories" to death...cuz i feel i have to check back to see if i covered every category instead of just having fun setting up hot punchlines, ya know? I've read many verses which had better lines but lost because the other person won a few meaningless categories when it comes to battle rapping

no hate...just real talk