Haunted By Those Dreams

[Le Tunisien]

[Verse1]
as a slave,im so brave ,alone in this cave
i would shave my nutt just to save my butt
Oh why not?this place is cold and hot
sittin in the same spot,i would rather get shot
never knew a season,neither a summer's day
i pray for reason,it aint pleasin to stay
got fate and im screamin,what is the date
is it temperate?is it june or may???
no love,no hate..thats why my eye shines
and every fair from fair,sometimes declines
how long,it has to be?so wrong,i couldnt see
its just myself and me,alone we aint three
i would get On a knee,god send me free!
lonely,as a cloud,never saw crowd
nothin to talk about,so i just close my mouth
so silent,aint loud,im allowed to be proud

[Chorus]
I Get Haunted By those Dreams Every Night!
I Got on a SpotLight,But Man i Cant Fight!

[Verse2]
i dream those dreams,i"v seen these screens,
it bleeds it seems,cuz i hear "please" screams
on me you can lean,i'v been on those scences
in Everywhere i been, got sick of cold themes
on no where i could lie,thats why i close my eye
i never got high and would prefer to die
to see the other world i could just be spy
always in bad Mood,Aint nothing good
always in solitude,got no food in the hood
and i would if i could or should to be sued
for being in a lake i would bake my mistake
just for god's sake learn to give and take
cuz im tired of life,n i wanna have a break
it is never late to become so fucking great
you know its not a dream,its just a nightmare
say life is quite fair,when u have to hide there


[Verse3]
my lifes is so dark,this fight is so hard
no fkn light to spark,its just right to argue
with myself i aint crazy,please help im faintin
in this quick sand,i just keep on failin
oh shit some/one please Unlock this ceilin
it is insane N,My Damn Parents Are Splittin
i just feel like quittin,dont think im bullshittin
i be sittin while spittin,spittin while sittin
i dont fit in this life, but i just try to fit in
damn,my life sucks balls,and even sucks at suckin em
i fail so hard,these obstacles im stuck in em
i keep gettin haunted by thse dreams everynight
my schemes are so tight,im fighting for my right
to speak,my right to cheat my soul with a beat
This Pain is so Deep...it wont let me Go Sleep!

[Emadyville]

the flow on it was a little choppy at times, try countin syllables when you write, also could just be how i read it. Rhymes were pretty simple but you did rhyme a lot which was nice to see, I would suggest working on a more creative way to word what your saying, but this wasn't bad

[Spyder]

its was kinda boring for me, idk i never really picked up in to it
the beggining lines were a little corny to me, you gotta realy feel your pieces bro
not bad, but not great

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[Le Tunisien]

the flow on it was a little choppy at times, try countin syllables when you write, also could just be how i read it. Rhymes were pretty simple but you did rhyme a lot which was nice to see, I would suggest working on a more creative way to word what your saying, but this wasn't bad

it flows perfect for me