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Wisdom And Poetry

Postby mcZu » Dec 24th, '09, 20:42

Definition Of Rap: Wisdom And Poetry.
First volume of a series on what rap really is about, the first one covers media and rap...

Am I assisting this attitude towards a point beyond being realistic?
I'm not a pessimist, I'm a realist. Is it my fault reality is pessimistic?
The real serious delirious issues at hand are me and you.
Issues that misuse the youthfullness of a person, you.
So, due to the massive dark passage the media is giving you,
..you should try to envision your own view, while escaping the coup
..on a human mind, no human minds to be neglected, right?
A human being these days amounts to being in favour for human rights, right?
We're all just being in favour for our own being, human? Yeah, right.
Ego's that resemble the hypocritical reflection of aid.
Ergo, the assemblage of reality is affecting the human brain...
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby mcZu » Dec 30th, '09, 00:39

Bump.
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby Solace » Dec 30th, '09, 00:45

You know I would love to feed it but most of that shit I just dont understand what your saying. Too complex for me. 'Cept that line that was on your MSN PM not too long ago is still :worship: in my mind.
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby mcZu » Dec 30th, '09, 00:50

Lol, thanks, It isn't that complex, you'll get what I'm trying to say after reading it a couple of times. Thanks for checking though, 'preciate it. :b:
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby Solace » Dec 30th, '09, 00:54

Am I assisting this attitude towards a point beyond being realistic?
I'm not a pessimist, I'm a realist. Is it my fault reality is pessimistic?

That ones pretty easy to get

The real serious delirious issues at hand are me and you.
Issues that misuse the youthfullness of a person, you.

The real issue is the public and people use the general youth to get money, where you refer to mainstream?

So, due to the massive dark passage the media is giving you,
..you should try to envision your own view, while escaping the coup

Because of the way rap is portrayed through the media think of it your own way and escape from the stereotype?

A human being these days amounts to being in favour for human rights, right?
We're all just being in favour for our own being, human? Yeah, right.
Ego's that resemble the hypocritical reflection of aid.
Ergo, the assemblage of reality is affecting the human brain...

Dunno.


I tried :)
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby mcZu » Dec 30th, '09, 00:58

I applaud you for getting 80% of the message Omar.
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby Spyder » Dec 30th, '09, 06:48

:o that was dope and complex as shit, this is the piece i have been missing from you Zu
first two lines were my favorite, and not cause they were the easiest to get as Solace said ;)
top notch with a quick drop :worship:
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 30th, '09, 09:36

Yeah nice concept for the series gettin the truth out lol. Stay up Zu
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby mcZu » Dec 30th, '09, 17:01

Spyder wrote::o that was dope and complex as shit, this is the piece i have been missing from you Zu
first two lines were my favorite, and not cause they were the easiest to get as Solace said ;)
top notch with a quick drop :worship:

Thanks Spydie, 'preciate it. :b:

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah nice concept for the series gettin the truth out lol. Stay up Zu

Thanks Yah, you know how I grind. :b:

PINK wrote:I absolutely love pieces like this.It is well written, quite complex, yet understandable. I see the message, so good job. :y:

Thanks Pink, appreciate it. Glad you liked it. :b:
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby dR3 » Dec 30th, '09, 23:43

The reason why I gave you a shouty.

Propz man! :y:
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby mcZu » Dec 31st, '09, 00:00

dR.dR3 wrote:The reason why I gave you a shouty.

Propz man! :y:

Thanks dR.dR3, 'preciate it man. :b:
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby mcZu » Dec 31st, '09, 00:10

Yes, quite alot, depends on my mood though.
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry

Postby mcZu » Dec 31st, '09, 00:19

Not anymore that often, since people didn't mind to leave a comment in the past. But I might post more pieces like this in the near future.
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