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Postby mcZu » Dec 31st, '09, 00:43

When ya chick was putting on this Trojan while talking smooth of course
She didn’t know that after I fucked her she would end up hoarse
After I nutted on her top she had to shift gear like a sped up Porsche
He Is-Real? Nah, mo’ like Palestine, pal, stop them lies, I’ll leave 'em cut on the floor
He couldn’t be on top if he was fucking missionary style, yet he a stuck up whore
He’s missing style, talking reckless, but he don’t want any drama with me
Dawg, you should just quit talking for show like Oprah Winfrey
He opt to tempt me, step back soldier, I’m a General, nobody wants it with me..


This is just an 8 bar diss in general, lol.

Easy...

If you feel like this is aimed at you, then I guess it is.
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby Solace » Dec 31st, '09, 01:23

He Is-Real? Nah, mo’ like Palestine, pal,

Hahah.

Good stuff for what it is. :y:
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby J Roc » Dec 31st, '09, 02:24

mcZu wrote:When ya chick was putting on this Trojan while talking smooth of course
She didn’t know that after I fucked her she would end up hoarse
After I nutted on her top she had to shift gear like a sped up Porsche
He Is-Real? Nah, mo’ like Palestine, pal, stop them lies, I’ll leave 'em cut on the floor
He couldn’t be on top if he was fucking missionary style, yet he a stuck up whore
He’s missing style, talking reckless, but he don’t want any drama with me
Dawg, you should just quit talking for show like Oprah Winfrey
He opt to tempt me, step back soldier, I’m a General, nobody wants it with me..


This is just an 8 bar diss in general, lol.

Easy...

If you feel like this is aimed at you, then I guess it is.


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Re: You asked for it...

Postby mcZu » Dec 31st, '09, 02:26

J roc wrote:
mcZu wrote:When ya chick was putting on this Trojan while talking smooth of course
She didn’t know that after I fucked her she would end up hoarse
After I nutted on her top she had to shift gear like a sped up Porsche
He Is-Real? Nah, mo’ like Palestine, pal, stop them lies, I’ll leave 'em cut on the floor
He couldn’t be on top if he was fucking missionary style, yet he a stuck up whore
He’s missing style, talking reckless, but he don’t want any drama with me
Dawg, you should just quit talking for show like Oprah Winfrey
He opt to tempt me, step back soldier, I’m a General, nobody wants it with me..


This is just an 8 bar diss in general, lol.

Easy...

If you feel like this is aimed at you, then I guess it is.


@ Roccy?

Was that your girl? :o
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby bullet_boy46 » Dec 31st, '09, 02:27

J roc wrote:
mcZu wrote:When ya chick was putting on this Trojan while talking smooth of course
She didn’t know that after I fucked her she would end up hoarse
After I nutted on her top she had to shift gear like a sped up Porsche
He Is-Real? Nah, mo’ like Palestine, pal, stop them lies, I’ll leave 'em cut on the floor
He couldn’t be on top if he was fucking missionary style, yet he a stuck up whore
He’s missing style, talking reckless, but he don’t want any drama with me
Dawg, you should just quit talking for show like Oprah Winfrey
He opt to tempt me, step back soldier, I’m a General, nobody wants it with me..


This is just an 8 bar diss in general, lol.

Easy...

If you feel like this is aimed at you, then I guess it is.


@ Roccy?


anyone notice that :whistle: lol, i didnt, but who is this at :confusion:
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby mcZu » Dec 31st, '09, 02:28

Roccy thinks it's directed at him 'cause of the ''easy'', lmfao. :smoking:
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby Spyder » Dec 31st, '09, 02:52

for me it was only alright Zuluhulugulumulu

though i still dont know how to make hidden messages :(
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby Solace » Dec 31st, '09, 03:33

Only retards dont know how to make hidden messages, like you Spyder
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby bullet_boy46 » Dec 31st, '09, 03:41

Spyder wrote:for me it was only alright Zuluhulugulumulu

though i still dont know how to make hidden messages :(


you have to do



this

YOU SEE THE WORD THIS :shifty:

just do font color and do white

type ur text and your done
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby Spyder » Dec 31st, '09, 03:44

solace says it and he didnt knwo how either hahahha
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby Solace » Dec 31st, '09, 03:45

Is that why 60% of my posts include hidden messages owned owned
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby bullet_boy46 » Dec 31st, '09, 03:51

^^ solace is subliminal :shifty:

anyways i gotta go take a crap...oh and zu that was good ;)
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby Spyder » Dec 31st, '09, 04:41

Solace wrote:Is that why 60% of my posts include hidden messages owned owned


teehee, ima go look at every single on of you post now
you little lying cunt nugget



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Re: You asked for it...

Postby Solace » Dec 31st, '09, 04:42

im not a lying little cunt nugget ill prove it :(
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Re: You asked for it...

Postby Spyder » Dec 31st, '09, 04:45

:laughing:

i saw the ones on this thread
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