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Re: Native Pride

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 28th, '09, 23:21

gutawafang wrote:been a long time man.

I see them multis. :worship:

The hook is pretty cool. I sorta feel it.

what's red cloud?
With Red Cloud bumpin on the speakers I seek silence and read her,
I guess it's just a person. haha

This is weird, kinda spoils the piece.
I'm working on third string to make this earning work see,
I'm typing a bit slower now, my thoughts more reserved,

Still I liked it. ;)


Yeah red cloud is a native rapper should check him out. I was using the word reserved ironically lol subliminal thing.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Native Pride

Postby bullet_boy46 » Dec 28th, '09, 23:27

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Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush :blinking:

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Re: Native Pride

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 28th, '09, 23:39

bullet_boy46 wrote:Image


lol awesome smiley :worship:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Native Pride

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 31st, '09, 11:11

Probably my favorite song. This one or the football one.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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