2sDay vs The Edge

[2sDay]

12 lines, no restrictions

3-0 KO first one to 3 votes

ima post in a second

[Edge]

i got mine ready and need to go eat so imma just post mine

Im so hot, I walked through hell and I felt cold
Battle u? this kid is only thirteen years old
I almost feel guilty, beatin on this juvenile
He sayin imma be wack, hes in true denial
While I smile, realize imma become a child abuser
Hes fucken with his elders, plus im a wild drug user
Smash u like I smash my cruiser, after to much to drink
I smoked to much to think, I still beat him in a blink
Leave u running like a sink, I blade u like a skating rink
Im valuable like a mink, me and u just don’t link
we will never be in sync, stick to pop like N’Sync
Fuck with Edge and ur gunna see the mountains brink

[Edge]

u gunna go?

[bullet_boy46]

i got mine ready and need to go eat so imma just post mine

Im so hot, I walked through hell and I felt cold
Battle u? this kid is only thirteen years old
I almost feel guilty, beatin on this juvenile
He sayin imma be wack, hes in true denial
While I smile, realize imma become a child abuser
Hes fucken with his elders, plus im a wild drug user
Smash u like I smash my cruiser, after to much to drink
I smoked to much to think, I still beat him in a blink
Leave u running like a sink, I blade u like a skating rink
Im valuable like a mink, me and u just don’t link
we will never be in sync, stick to pop like N’Sync
Fuck with Edge and ur gunna see the mountains brink

we will never be in sync, stick to pop like N’Sync

[Edge]

i got mine ready and need to go eat so imma just post mine

Im so hot, I walked through hell and I felt cold
Battle u? this kid is only thirteen years old
I almost feel guilty, beatin on this juvenile
He sayin imma be wack, hes in true denial
While I smile, realize imma become a child abuser
Hes fucken with his elders, plus im a wild drug user
Smash u like I smash my cruiser, after to much to drink
I smoked to much to think, I still beat him in a blink
Leave u running like a sink, I blade u like a skating rink
Im valuable like a mink, me and u just don’t link
we will never be in sync, stick to pop like N’Sync
Fuck with Edge and ur gunna see the mountains brink

we will never be in sync, stick to pop like N’Sync

thanks man, vote once he responds

[bullet_boy46]

^^ you still didnt win it though, you never know his response

[2sDay]

Man please just stick to the puffing and blazing,
Cuz looking up how to rap and rhyme on Bing,
Wont help enough, so yelp and puff, while your living,
And just serve me my entree, how bout a suflee,
Before I get you fired, Why did you drop that tray,
Fucking waiter, see ya later, i'll be in college,
Gaining knowledge to not be a waiter, like Mr.Edge,
I'm only thirteen, But a G, a fiend, a rhyming machine,
That has seen, more shit than Edge while he serves fresh sardine,
I'm a true MC, as you see, The Edge is shaking he wants to flee,
To the casting call for Glee, Undeniably the gayest show on T.V,
Fitting for him, well im done roasting, Now he wont fuck with me,

lines 1-3: He's smokes
lines 4-9: he's a waiter

no hate The Edge

[BILI]

Man please just stick to the puffing and blazing,
Cuz looking up how to rap and rhyme on Bing,
Wont help enough, so yelp and puff, while your living,
And just serve me my entree, how bout a suflee,
Before I get you fired, Why did you drop that tray,
Fucking waiter, see ya later, i'll be in college,
Gaining knowledge to not be a waiter, like Mr.Edge,
I'm only thirteen, But a G, a fiend, a rhyming machine,
That has seen, more shit than Edge while he serves fresh sardine,
I'm a true MC, as you see, The Edge is shaking he wants to flee,
To the casting call for Glee, Undeniably the gayest show on T.V,
Fitting for him, well im done roasting, Now he wont fuck with me,

did you rhyme anything??

[2sDay]

Man please just stick to the puffing and blazing,
Cuz looking up how to rap and rhyme on Bing,
Wont help enough, so yelp and puff, while your living,
And just serve me my entree, how bout a suflee,
Before I get you fired, Why did you drop that tray,
Fucking waiter, see ya later, i'll be in college,
Gaining knowledge to not be a waiter, like Mr.Edge,
I'm only thirteen, But a G, a fiend, a rhyming machine,
That has seen, more shit than Edge while he serves fresh sardine,
I'm a true MC, as you see, The Edge is shaking he wants to flee,
To the casting call for Glee, Undeniably the gayest show on T.V,
Fitting for him, well im done roasting, Now he wont fuck with me,

did you rhyme anything??

are u kidding me? everything rhymed

[Edge]

Man please just stick to the puffing and blazing,
Cuz looking up how to rap and rhyme on Bing,
Wont help enough, so yelp and puff, while your living,
And just serve me my entree, how bout a suflee,
Before I get you fired, Why did you drop that tray,
Fucking waiter, see ya later, i'll be in college,
Gaining knowledge to not be a waiter, like Mr.Edge,
I'm only thirteen, But a G, a fiend, a rhyming machine,
That has seen, more shit than Edge while he serves fresh sardine,
I'm a true MC, as you see, The Edge is shaking he wants to flee,
To the casting call for Glee, Undeniably the gayest show on T.V,
Fitting for him, well im done roasting, Now he wont fuck with me,

lines 1-3: He's smokes
lines 4-9: he's a waiter

no hate The Edge

nice, but for ur information im a waiter so i could pay off college lol

[bullet_boy46]

FLOW- edge (flowed his better)
STRUCTURE- 2sday
PUNCHES-none
MULTIES-tie
RHYMES- edge (some of your rhymes 2sday i dont think connected)
VOCAB- 2sday
COMPLEXITY- edge
NAMEPLAY- 2sday
OTHER- edge (i enjoyed reading it)

overall- i think edge won it

[BILI]

Man please just stick to the puffing and blazing,
Cuz looking up how to rap and rhyme on Bing,
Wont help enough, so yelp and puff, while your living,
And just serve me my entree, how bout a suflee,
Before I get you fired, Why did you drop that tray,
Fucking waiter, see ya later, i'll be in college,
Gaining knowledge to not be a waiter, like Mr.Edge,
I'm only thirteen, But a G, a fiend, a rhyming machine,
That has seen, more shit than Edge while he serves fresh sardine,
I'm a true MC, as you see, The Edge is shaking he wants to flee,
To the casting call for Glee, Undeniably the gayest show on T.V,
Fitting for him, well im done roasting, Now he wont fuck with me,

did you rhyme anything??

are u kidding me? everything rhymed

no its not,it started to rhyme from collage

collage,edge,machine,sardine,flee,TV,me


whats with that tray???suflee??? ,plus I find blazin,bling,living awkward

all in all,weird rhyme scheme

[bullet_boy46]

so bili vote then

[BILI]

Its pretty obvious that Edge took this

[2sDay]

tray and suflee do rhyme but i know its a weird rhyme scheme but anyways vote