Slimsoxshady vs Coleon (Open for Voting)

[slimsoxshady]

6 lines, no flips
Aight be back in a few and drop mine

[slimsoxshady]

A sub for the 5 Star Generals? Not forum's finest and you hoping to climb this?
When I bark shit just blows - I'm so sharp with the flow, Cole's porcupine-less
Leave you sole-less(soul-less) when it's wore-out(War out), same as this battle
You get rocked so hard, might as well just go lay in some gravel
Have you stopped in your tracks like dried cement mix, you need a Prilosec fix
Cuz Cole gets burnt - nicely shaped sticks, when i rock the mic like 98 bricks


Line 3: sole-less = shoe sole worn out, soul-less = dead
Line 5&6: Prilosec OTC = treats hearburn. This goes on to the next line
Line 6: nicely shaped sticks = firewood

[Spyder]

dope shit

i will talk to sajn about getting Coleon's thing passed as the new systme by popular vote

[slimsoxshady]

not that i got "buttfucked in the tourney"
but good stuff....vote

[classthe_king]

I'll use this since you both have

(3)Punches: Sox
(3)Personals: Coleon
(2)Multis: Sox
(2)Flow: Coleon
(2)Wordplay: Sox
(2)Nameplay: Cole
(1)Enjoyment: Cole

8-7 Coleon

very close

[RealSickLindley]

(3)Punches: Slim
(3)Personals: Coleon
(2)Multis: Slim
(2)Flow: Coleon
(2)Wordplay: Coleon
(2)Nameplay: Coleon
(1)Enjoyment: Coleon

10-5

Closer than the numbers suggest, because i enjoyed your verse Slim
It was just always going to lose with me, because Coleon's was a smoother read, more personal, and better structured.

A little tip (take it if you want it, if you don't, then cool) watch the length and structure of your lines. Because all of your pieces, i personally find hard to read, as dope as they are. Purely because most lines read like they've got just a word or two too much to flow right. Because if a line/bar flows dope and easy in my head, then i'm more likely to go "DAMN" at the punch at the end of it. Get that shit right and you'll be a force to be reckoned with..

[Spyder]

(3)Punches: Slim
(3)Personals: Coleon
(2)Multis: Slim
(2)Flow: Slim
(2)Wordplay: Tie
(2)Nameplay: Coleon
(1)Enjoyment: Slim, because im a fan of constant internals and multies

10-7 Slim
Coleon dont worry bro just need some warming up

[mcZu]

(3)Punches: Cole
(3)Personals: Cole
(2)Multis: Slim
(2)Flow: Slim
(2)Wordplay: Slim
(2)Nameplay: Cole
(1)Enjoyment: Cole

9-6

Close, but I'ma have to give it to Cole, nice battle though guys.

[Spyder]

4-0 ko

lock it up

i voted slim... so its 3-1

[Spyder]

yea i hate that your a general

[Spyder]

i do what i want, weather permitting

[Le Tunisien]

Over Kast got it backwards, so that's why he's Knocked Out

Coleon

[Le Tunisien]

(3)Punches: Cole
(3)Personals: Cole
(3)Multis: Slim
(2)Flow: Slim
(2)Wordplay: Slim
(2)Nameplay: Cole
(1)Enjoyment: Cole

9-7

col

[slimsoxshady]

^ get ur math skills up...then come back and edit the comment

[BILI]

^ get ur math skills up...then come back and edit the comment

its 4:1,thats tko