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DeJa Vu PART 2

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DeJa Vu PART 2

Postby Cookzee » Jan 4th, '10, 03:13

you don't know what it's like, so don't come up and say to me
you can relate to what i say on this tape, aint it mean
i fucking hate it please, this aint what i play to see
this shit is for me, it's the only way he made me be
i monster baby but maybe i was misunderstood
if i lost a leg to stand on, i would use the other foot
shit i would struggle, but nothing like my mother would
my mother made it seem repaired, when shit was only covered up
whats up with daddy mummy, daddies just a bit depressed
daddy eats to much, and i bet that daddies work'll get him stressed
why don't he see the doctor, the doc could give him pills
yeah he will, but at first we really have to let him chill
coz he aint thrilled, and i don't want him mad at me
he could leave any moment see julie and get back at me
and we would lose the house, i don't wanna back packed
look how far we've come darling, i don't wanna back track
survival is taught by the survivors, not by those who benefitted.
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Re: DeJa Vu PART 2

Postby Cookzee » Jan 8th, '10, 19:30

bump :tounge2:
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Re: DeJa Vu PART 2

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 8th, '10, 19:43

Other people on here would say the rhymes werent all that amazing and blah blah blah but fuck em, I dig this track homie. Its one of those more simple just flowin kind of things with a good vibe to it. Much love man good shit :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: DeJa Vu PART 2

Postby Cookzee » Jan 8th, '10, 20:28

cheers man, means a lot
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Re: DeJa Vu PART 2

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 8th, '10, 22:22

Yeah no problem man
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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