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Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 21:06

Now I gotta tear it down, Me and Sox, a pair of clowns?
Are u aware u sound, like u were put here with downs
If im a clown, im the clown from the movie “It”
U could meet my uzi clip, u choosey bitch
If Im the clown? why r u just getting laughed at
I walk into ur house, already wearing my gas mask
I whip out a gas grenade, pull the pin and blast that
U want none with F&F, u want none with 5 Generals
Cause these skills that we b showin are congenital
Chop off ya genitals and send them to ur family
Who r u to judge me like Simon, Paula and Randy
This kids tryin to be tough, hes in elementary
He tried beefin with me, but beef to me is complementary
Eventually ur gunna c y fuckin with me is the wrong decision
So keep mentioning my name and u wont be long livin

Line 2- downs meaning down syndrome
Line 3- there is a killer clown in the movie “It”
Line 11- they are judges on “American Idol”

i didnt put much time into this as u could probably see because i didnt wanna watse it on him, but he mentioned my name and wasnt gunna let this pussy slide... feedback appreciated
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby slimsoxshady » Jan 4th, '10, 21:09

fuck him with an AIDS dick niqqa!!!

lol, this is really dope though..some good punches and wordplay
this is my favorite verse from you so far :y:
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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 21:14

slimsoxshady wrote:fuck him with an AIDS dick niqqa!!!

lol, this is really dope though..some good punches and wordplay
this is my favorite verse from you so far :y:


thanks man, appreciate it :y:
and i dont wish aids on him, that would kill him to slowly lol
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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby slimsoxshady » Jan 4th, '10, 21:23

Edge wrote:
slimsoxshady wrote:fuck him with an AIDS dick niqqa!!!

lol, this is really dope though..some good punches and wordplay
this is my favorite verse from you so far :y:


thanks man, appreciate it :y:
and i dont wish aids on him, that would kill him to slowly lol

Lil Wayne line ;)
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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 21:24

slimsoxshady wrote:
Edge wrote:
slimsoxshady wrote:fuck him with an AIDS dick niqqa!!!

lol, this is really dope though..some good punches and wordplay
this is my favorite verse from you so far :y:


thanks man, appreciate it :y:
and i dont wish aids on him, that would kill him to slowly lol

Lil Wayne line ;)


ohhh haha forgot about tht line
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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby Spyder » Jan 4th, '10, 21:36

this is your best diss yet, though alot of the words were basic
you said clown like 5 times in a snetance, i know it was to flip him
but uust be more creative :y:
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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 21:43

Spyder wrote:this is your best diss yet, though alot of the words were basic
you said clown like 5 times in a snetance, i know it was to flip him
but uust be more creative :y:


thanks man :y:
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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby Spyder » Jan 4th, '10, 21:45

you dropped the "The" :unsure:
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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 21:50

Spyder wrote:you dropped the "The" :unsure:


yea i didnt like it lol... plus i switched up my style more, tryin to incorporate multis more cause i dditn fully understand what a multi was til recently lol
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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby Solace » Jan 5th, '10, 03:40

Definitely better than anything he's ever put out. You're improving. Your writtens remind me of myself when I started out, though many people probably say that too.
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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby Edge » Jan 5th, '10, 03:43

Solace wrote:Definitely better than anything he's ever put out. You're improving. Your writtens remind me of myself when I started out, though many people probably say that too.


thanks man :y: maybe we could do a colab soon
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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 5th, '10, 05:57

Yeah man really good shit bro. I see you gettin better by the minute :y: Stay up G
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: fuck 2sday

Postby Edge » Jan 5th, '10, 06:54

thanks guys, really appreciate it :y:
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