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Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby mcZu » Jan 6th, '10, 01:56

Second verse of the W.A.P series.
Life is centered on ‘if’, so our journey is based on doubt
The mouth is marked with hesitation, so there is no doubt
That the ‘f’ in life is a cloak to cover up the hoax of life
So we coax ourselves to connect with things called right
Enter war thinking it’s about who’s right, it’s about who’s left
We try not to give up and stay down with our shoes intact
While walking on water suffering from a messiah complex
When the rain pours we better be on Noah’s arks deck
Life’s fragile, so we support it with frames like an architect
While trying to be good like one of the arch angels in fact
There don’t go days by where we don't think with whom we stand
Evil or good? At the end of the day we just try to withstand
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 6th, '10, 02:00

This a dope fuckin series Zu...I love the rhyming scheme on this...and the way you ask a question and then sort of answer it but still leave it open. Idk Zu...I'm lookin forward to the rest of this series...good shit
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby mcZu » Jan 6th, '10, 02:13

Fa-Q wrote:This a dope fuckin series Zu...I love the rhyming scheme on this...and the way you ask a question and then sort of answer it but still leave it open. Idk Zu...I'm lookin forward to the rest of this series...good shit

Thanks Fa-Q, 'preciate it. I'll definitly make sure to keep this series going.
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby mcZu » Jan 6th, '10, 02:17

Coleon wrote:I feel like I've read this before :confusion:

'cause I've posted this in the past, didn't get much feed, almost none really. So I re-released it under this new series.
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 6th, '10, 02:17

nice rhyming scheme :y:
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby mcZu » Jan 6th, '10, 02:19

le tunisien wrote:nice rhyming scheme :y:

Thanks Le Tunisien, appreciate it.
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby Emadyville » Jan 6th, '10, 02:20

that architect line was :worship:

verse dope, great job zu :y:
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby Pllumi » Jan 6th, '10, 02:21

great :worship:
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby mcZu » Jan 6th, '10, 02:22

Emadyville wrote:that architect line was :worship:

verse dope, great job zu :y:

Thanks Dubs, 'preciate it man.

Pllumi wrote:great :worship:

Thanks Pllumi, glad you liked it.
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby gutawafang » Jan 6th, '10, 02:36

I fed it before. Well, I'ma say this is brilliant again. :worship:
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 6th, '10, 02:39

Dope 5th line. :shifty:

Yeah, solid piece overall. Holy shit; this shit got more already 10 replies in less than an hour. It's exciting to see people actually bothering to give feedback these recent days. Maybe because of beef. :whistle:
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 6th, '10, 02:42

Coleon wrote:
Relapse.LP wrote:Dope 5th line. :shifty:


I was thinkin the same thing :b: your drop was dope too :flutter:

You mean Backstage? :wub:
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Re: Wisdom And Poetry: Life

Postby mcZu » Jan 6th, '10, 23:50

Thanks you all, 'preciate it. :flower:
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