Favorite Piece thread: Fa-Q-"My time has come"

[Yah-hah]

I've always wanted to paint these walls,
Phones off the hook I doubt it recieves calls,
Til after each one of my knees falls,
I'm looking down the barrel to say I've seen my doom,
All my belongings together in my clean room,
The last thing ill remember is that one joke girl,
The last thing ill see is the gun smoke swirl,
My room isn't a hospital,
So please call an ambulance as soon as possible,
It won't matter ill die a groom alone,
My spouse this grey tomb stone,
And at noon I'll be home
This morning my final sunrise shined,
My pupils ajust as each tries and find,
Jokes on me now my eyes are blind,


I guess my time has come,
As soon as this rhyme is done,
Ill be done,
So guard your heart before the next girl takes it, and breaks it,
My time has come,


The hallways cleared,
Which I always feared,
She's the slut I'm the dunce,
For some reason all the lockers shut at once,
My ears perk up at the sound of her voice,
But how could I tell her when she's around other boys,
But now she's with her other dimwit friends,
If she only knew I didn't care about her split ends,
Even though carbons free,
She made it hard to breathe,
I'm doodling her name in a heart,
Oh no here comes a flame and a spark,
But as soon as she brought it she doused it with the rain and the dark,
I boarded her plane and she taught me how to fly,
My friend my enemy who shot me out the sky,
So ask yourself when did you cross the line,
Cause your sanity cost me mine,


I guess my time has come,
As soon as this rhyme is done,
Ill be done,
So guard your heart before the next girl takes it, and breaks it,
My time has come,


My lightbulb burned out,
I wonder how I would have turned out,
Doctor lawyer would I have gotten any taller,
Would I save a life,
And after 20 years marriage would I still crave my wife,
But my times up no more hours til my doom,
All these flowers fill my tomb,
And my spirit towers the moon,
And it reminisces that your words were a new poison found,
Now your tears on my gravesite just moisten the ground,
Next time you break a heart,
Find your cold one and take it apart,
And see your rotting from the inside out,
I hope your tears never dry out,
And when people ask what you cry about,
You'll say that note and every haunting lyric,
Was him in the form of a taunting spirit,
So just put on that fake smile,
But after you read this I hope it takes awhile,


I guess my time has come,
As soon as this rhyme is done,
Ill be done,
So guard your heart before the next girl takes it, and breaks it,
My time has come

[Fa-Q]

thanks for doing this Jus....this was a dope ass idea

[Yah-hah]

No problem homie. lol dope sig

[Fa-Q]

No, its not Pink...I saw this news story about a year ago about this kid that killed himself because a girl played a prank on him saying she liked him and she really didn't. It was sad and I felt inspired so I wrote this song

[Yah-hah]

Yo I think I saw that one

[Fa-Q]

Yea...that is messed up...I think he hung himself instead shooting himself...but I changed it up a bit...this is by far my favorite piece I've ever written

[Yah-hah]

Yeah this one is one of my favorites, I think my favorite is the one where you got the riddles in it, like the dandy lion line and ashes of lee, what is that one called?