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They Call Me

Postby RealSickLindley » Jan 6th, '10, 19:40

Cos..
*Places Ether on the Table*

They..

They call me..



They call me the hope, the potential or just the new school,
Here's a rope before you get menstrual and just lose fool,
It's not cool to be like that, so fight back, hurt me hardly,
Drool at tight rap, two faced twat, site's callin' you Harvey,
Don't start me.. Cos i'm just playin' now, so behave clown,
Arse licker on about Vets like Glitter preyin' at a Playground,
But now i'll beat you purple, 1,000th post will kill you tossers,
Too many losses, 3 circles will end it, like naughts and crosses..

Hang with bosses, in your position you definitly face a mission,
Read what's written, this isn't a taste, it's just a premenition,
I'm efficient when i depose of dudes, includin' you maggot,
Guy was in your crew, now name his songs "wack ass faggot",
The whole packet, the ultimate bitch tryin' to be a big man,
But he just lacks it, multi's are a bitch, so he aint a big fan,
A big Stan, they say Em's soft, but you son, make me wonder,
That caucasian had his day, your elevation has been in a slumber..

1,000's just a number, that's what he thinks with limited mind,
Under when i hit you with rhymes what feels like infinite times,
Lines just full of crap, it's silly stuff, on to your trap just in time ,
I'm not holdin' back, cos this "Puff" was tryin' to take my "Shyne",
Like, as soon as it happened, the response was "What the fuck?!"
Rapped with the dead before, I was stuck, once was just bad luck,
It took me a couple of days to realise that infact, shit was DeJa Vu,
Again, guys weren't intact, and i was better than the leader too..

So what to do? My fuckin' God.. You really must just hate the flu,
Cos you talk shit about the dude that's sickest in your Crew..
I knew that there was some other undercover shit little Brother,
But do you talk 'bout him with the mouth you use with your mother??
You're good for each other, so don't let the Captain hear you bitch,
Cos our Opens bring a shudder, whilst your Opens bring an Itch,
Make you twitch, your shits full of cheese, like Wallace and Gromit,
I'm on it, it's my chance to sieze, and time to fullfill my promise..


~ RealSick '10 ~
My Top 5 (in no order)-

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Big l
Biggie Smalls
Royce Da 5'9"
Jigga

'If you do it, it's only to a degree, i am the AIDS.. No one wants to do it with me..'
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Re: They Call Me

Postby Spyder » Jan 6th, '10, 19:44

who was this to? :unsure:
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Re: They Call Me

Postby RealSickLindley » Jan 6th, '10, 19:46

Spyder wrote:who was this to? :unsure:

No one on here :flower:

Got some shit on a guy on my other forum, and i felt a bit mean..
So i put this hook in the water so he can respond and i can roast him :smoking:

Purely coincidence that i'm approaching 1,000 on both sites.
My Top 5 (in no order)-

Eminem
Big l
Biggie Smalls
Royce Da 5'9"
Jigga

'If you do it, it's only to a degree, i am the AIDS.. No one wants to do it with me..'
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Re: They Call Me

Postby Spyder » Jan 6th, '10, 19:50

o ight
it was pretty dope man
cant really comment on personals sense idk the dude lol
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Re: They Call Me

Postby RealSickLindley » Jan 6th, '10, 19:52

Spyder wrote:o ight
it was pretty dope man
cant really comment on personals sense idk the dude lol

Yeah i know man :y:
Thanks for even reading it
Just wanted to show people on here that i was doper than in my battles in your Tourney
When i'm not trying to write 8 Lines on people that i don't know apart from their profile lol
Post a link to any piece you want feed back on in return if you want mate.
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Eminem
Big l
Biggie Smalls
Royce Da 5'9"
Jigga

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