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My Roc diss I never released

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 8th, '10, 00:55

Well I was tired of being a douche so I kinda let it go right before I was about to post this...but I think its pretty good lol...no beef tho roc I swear...


Your brain aint workin, you must have a slow connection,
You must like to show affection,
Just like Jay-Z you got some (D)ick (S)uckin (L)ips,
You're like a diner waitress, sick of fuckin tips,
I got so much shit on you, I'm bet your on a japanese website,
You tell one of the naughty schoolgirls, "You aint giving head right,"
Ha, your not king of the castle, is that what you call a fort,
Bitch your like a "roc" climbing midget, you'll still fall short,
I bet you and your fuck buddie are mad at you and Obama,
You both didn't pull out of a dry hole, but don't sue Osama,
You cuss worse, then if I tried to teach you the bitch word,
You suck dick worse, then a five leaches on richard,
Your weak lines, wouldn't affect non speakin mimes,
Bitch, I'll leave you rigormortas, people think you're a bigger contortionist,
I could get shit on you, without feedin you cyanide,
Cunt, I got a heat "seek"ing missle, go and try and hide,
Cunt, when you gonna fight back, and get in diss mode,
Punches gettin weaker and weaker, like your fist slowed,
Bitch this showed, your true colors, like a patriot,
See this diss is meaner, more than TR is makin it,
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Re: My Roc diss I never released

Postby gutawafang » Jan 8th, '10, 04:52

haha. that's quite a nice diss. not so direct.
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Re: My Roc diss I never released

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 8th, '10, 05:24

Thanks Co and Fish lol
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Re: My Roc diss I never released

Postby Xray » Jan 8th, '10, 05:58

Nothing about it seemed strong, the punches were really wack, and I didn't get a good flow from it.

Not feeling this.
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Re: My Roc diss I never released

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 8th, '10, 06:04

Just cause you don't understand them...don't mean they're weak...
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Re: My Roc diss I never released

Postby Xray » Jan 8th, '10, 06:22

Sure buddy, next time I'll lie about it being amazing incase your faq'ed up ass might get butt hurt again. Dumb ass with wack ass lines acting like its crazy. :shakehead:
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Re: My Roc diss I never released

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 8th, '10, 16:01

Haha XRay...you'll leave me FuckYoued up...are you seriously that dumb....and why did you comment if you were just gonna be a cunt. I wasn't an asshole on your song so why don't you just lay off
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