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Half-white

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 7th, '10, 04:30

In the land of grassdancers and my births rejection,
Death isn't the last answer it's the first question,
To make each sound seem like the worst question,
Sending my people alone into Earth's rectum,
My rap voice doesn't constitute my thoughts,
My plot is to make payments on the blanket you bought,
My unsmooth skin is sin in one movement,
Cause my one true sin in unproven to come through when,
You call it luck or you can call it a win,
Sittin with the scanner callin it in,
I'm fallen to sin when my fathers sin is my olive skin

Like yeah I'ma gravedancer, but on who's grave am I dancin?
Like no its a ghost you better pray its a phantom,
Clinging to these multis like a blanket in the winter,
Like a racist and a sinner I'm just fakin till I'm breakin in the center,
Re-awaken in the river of this orange haze,
Contemplatin my own liver where the thorn lays,
Consentratin but I'm shakin with nothing but frustration and war paint,
So my first son is named after where the storm lays,
I sleep with a women who stays where the white man enters,
Just so she can abort my child, sleepin with his white ancestors,
But hell isnt that just wat my father did,
Without full-blood like where's the honor kid?
And so my problem is I'm stuck in the middle,
Two giant races and fuck I'm so little,
I'm unable to cope with the fact I'm true but just passin the time,
Yellin NATIVE PRIDE! but I'm still lying half of the time
Last edited by Yah-hah on Jan 8th, '10, 20:06, edited 1 time in total.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Half-white

Postby D'Leh » Jan 7th, '10, 05:03

are you Eminem? damn you're good!!
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Half-white

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 7th, '10, 05:06

:P No I'm Native Americaminem :shifty:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Half-white

Postby Emadyville » Jan 7th, '10, 05:39

I'm fallen to sin when my fathers sin is my olive skin


Idk why but that line was :worship:

Another great piece :y:
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Re: Half-white

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 7th, '10, 05:55

Thanks D. :y: Good lookin out homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Half-white

Postby Enimee » Jan 7th, '10, 10:11

first bar was the hardest to me but yah no doubt sick shit....
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Re: Half-white

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 7th, '10, 10:14

Apprecaite it, yeah man pretty much made the netire song off of that one line lol :y: Good lookin out homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Half-white

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 7th, '10, 10:46

? Mever heard of it Thanks PINK
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Half-white

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 7th, '10, 22:39

Damn Jus...that last line is chilling...I'd like to see a full track outta this...this is foreal dope
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Re: Half-white

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 8th, '10, 08:21

Thanks G
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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